Updated Application

[Hitop1 2]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

Hitop1

How old are you?:

12

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Pacific time, America California

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes I do have a good grip on the english language and good grammar.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I have a very colorful personality and in my opinion I think I am pretty funny.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

I will login in daily and play every time I am on minecraft.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

It’s the discourse, attitude, and the action’s of a make believe situation in trying to understand the other person’s point of view.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I have a good experience with roleplaying I have done it on other games and I think it is pretty fun!

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Meta-Gaming is any out of character action made by the players character witch uses information that character is not meant be aware of.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:

Power-Emoting is the act of one character doing in action so quickly that the other character can not respond in time. Act’s such as Stealing, Killing , Punching esc.

In your own Words, define what Out of Character (OOC) is:

When you are OOC you are not acting like your character, you act like your self and not your character in the game.

In your own Words, define what In Character (IC) is:

To be IC is when you are acting like your character and not acting like you normally would

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect action and adventure at every corner and it would possibly be like a movie.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I used to play on eaglecreastgaming but that server want's you to register and enter your minecraft password so I have been looking for a new fun server!

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes I have read and understand all of the rules I think will make the game fun and safe!

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

Yes I do I will obey all of rules!

How did you hear about us?:

My friend “Bryanwaffles” told me about the server.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

Yes http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/64402-hitop1s-4th-application/page__p__502933#entry502933

In-Character:

Character Name:

Skagger

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :

Dwarf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

The Miner Dwarf

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

The young dwarf, Skagger Mcgraw . Comes from a long line of dwarves. Most of his family are all miners, like most dwarves. But Skagger never knew much about his parents or so much as his family tree.There once was a young blonde dwarf (Skagger) he was only 3 . when he was taken away from his mom and dad at this young age. So then he was raised by a close family friend,Balzud witch was 40 years old. Balzud taught Skagger how to mine and fight like a true . Soon enough Skagger was drinking and fighting for what believes! Now at the age of 9, Balzud fell into some very hot lava a stranger pushed him in the man was never identified guards think it might have been a furious orc! This resulted to Skagger being an orphan. From that day on Skagger promised to kill all orcs that he battles and all mob's.

“Present Day” Skagger is now 12 years old and is still an orphan. Not many people care to adopt Skagger, but for months Skagger has been planning to run away from the orphanage and set off on a daring adventure to find a family that will adopt him also to avenge Balzud and become a warrior! Skagger is a small little dwarf with his blond hair and a beard, Skagger wears a pair of pants, No shirt but he does have a pair of gloves. Skagger also has his trusty helmet. During Skagger’s venture’s he made a stop in Arethor. When he was walking down the street a man in an ally asked him if he would like to have a brand new sword so Skagger wanted to see what the man had, Skagger was trying to deal a good price for the sword but then when Skagger wasn’t looking the man knocked him out and took all that Skagger owned leaving him with nothing. Then eventually Skagger got back on his feet and started over. After that little misshape Skagger went on to a small dwarven village that is very far from Asulon Skagger rented a small home. He also got a job as a blacksmith it was a really messy job but knew he needed the money so he kept the job. But every day he would come home with coal on his face then eventually he made the wrong item for a customer and Skagger got fired. So with this Skagger couldn’t pay his rent so he traveled back to Asulon and continued his ventures.

What are your Character's ambitions?:

Avenge Balzud and find a new family.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

Pickaxe

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

Mining,Drinking and Fighting

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

Other Information about your Character:

Skagger is wiling to do any quest and protect anyone.

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Skagger knows that these warriors definitely out number

him but, Skagger cant just let the little Halfling get bullied by the to gruesome warriors. So with out trying to hurt the furious warriors Skagger insults the to warriors, Making fun of their ugly hair and how it’s all ratted out. While the warriors start to chase Skagger the little halfling makes a run for it and gets to safety. While the warriors are still chasing me still but I turn into a dark ally and I lose the warriors.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Ok what do ye got “The gross man tells me” I say let me have a sword he tells me 30 coins then I slowly start walking away then turn around. He yell to him got any food? “He tells me” I buy the food for 2 coins. Soon enough I take a bite, Its spoiled. *Skagger doesn’t feel well He falls to the ground* I ask for my money back but he told me “No refunds” I know I cant move so I sleep on the cold ground for the night. Then the next day I wake up and I am in a nice little house I don’t know what happened but I leave the house and continue my journey.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

I think to my self “I sure would like to own those thing's but he passes because he knows it would be stealing” Then I see someone else go for the chest. So I wait to see how he would do it, he fell trying to get up their but finally he jumped up there. But then the old chest closed and now it was locked. So while he was trying to picking the lock I run to get the guard. When we return he picked the lock he seemed to not care for the iron bar’s. But he did how ever take the golden sword, as he was swinging the sword around pretending to be fighting a zombie. The guard seizes the man and take’s him away. The rewards me for my good dead with the golden sword.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

I stop at the camp to see if they can donate some food or I can buy they tell the food is not for sale and donating, I was confused since it was a trading camp. But I later find out they wont donate or let people buy stuff off of them because you can only trade. So I offer some golden nuggets they were really shocked to see such a rare item. So with out thinking they accept my offer and give me some fresh bread! But then they try to buy my armor of me so I run away as quick as possible.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Skagger knows that the bandits out number him so he decides to make a trap. Skagger places a dispenser down on the ground and starts to hook it up to a stone pressure plate with some redstone. As the dirty bandits walk into town with one of them is carrying a bag filled with stolen gold ingots! As they come closer Skagger hits the stone pressure plate and dozens of arrows come firing at the first bandit and the others react giving the archers time to fire at them and take them out! Skagger gets his reward.

Anything else you would like to say?:

I do hope I get into this server thank you for your time

Please do not include his last application, the format was changed without his knowing. This will be his 5th application.

-Anore

[nppeck 601]

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied [Correct the X'ed Areas]:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on the World [x]

Open Ended Questions Need Refining [x]

Illegal Character Abilities [x]

Unrealistic Events [ ]

-Fabricated Large-Scale Events [ ]

Incorrect Lore [ ]

Power/Metagaming [x]

Contradicting Statements [ ]

Cliche [x]

Villain Application Needed [ ]

Incorrect Definitions of Power-emoting [ ]

Incorrect Definitions of Metagaming [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [x]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Incorrect Formatting [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unlore-ful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:I'm sorry, but I must deny your application. There are several reason for this denial. First of all, there is your biography. I encountered several problems with that. First of all, your wording makes it very difficult to understand your character's backstory. I found it very confusing to read over. You also don't include much dwarven lore. Finally, your ORQ's and biography had a general lack of detail that could have been greatly expanded upon.

[nppeck 601]

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