[Denied]Rp App For Deastoryer

[Deastoryer 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: Deastoryer

How old are you?: 16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Eastern Standard Time U.S.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I don't like to describe my self cause I don't like to make my self look good or bad. And if one describes there self it is open to lies most likely. But I guess I have to, Good, Nice, Love RPing, and Friendly unless you provoke me

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: alot about 4/7 days and that is full as in playing time is 4 days but over all 7 or 6 days.

What do you know about Roleplaying? It is fun But It is a way to escape from life to another one and have fun and be who you want whitch is why it's Roleplaying

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I love Skyrim and oblivion the one before it and Like to play all kinds of rp game Cause Im in those fantasy books Like LOTR Whitch I also play (The Lord of the Rings).

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: It is like cheating because your character doesn't know it but you do as the player so if you see a name plate thourgh a wall your player doesn't really see it so you can't act apon it.

In your own Words, define what Out of Character (OOC) is: When you can talk not all fancy like, and you are not in the roleplay, but talking out of it.

In your own Words, define what In Character (IC) is: When you are in the roleplay, roleplaying.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect it to be real roleplay as in Every one plays a part such as king warriors advetures and so on with villages between the castles and borders between lands of races

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Alot of servers but none RP and I left some of them because of bad Admins and support and not a good set up

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes, and I can't use teamspeak

How did you hear about us?: Minecraft Forums

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: I have not made a previous application.

In-Character:

Character Name: Pritchard

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) : Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): No Just a human not viking Human just regular

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):This will be long.Pritchard Was just a boy when they started watching him, he showed great skill in the feild of a Ranger which have been thought to practice Dark arts because of there uncanny skill in stealth shot with a bow and combat, not to metion speed and wits, but back to Pitchard. He showed great skill and potental and when he became of age to pick his trade he wanted to be a knight but was to small and "scrany" as the battle instructer had but it, next was battle horse apprentice and the instucter said he would get trumpled, and so on on this through the Diplomat cook and Speakers. And it had seemed that no one would take him till a shadowy figure steped up from a shadow, know one knew was there but the Baron and said he would take him. After years of Apprentice-ship he was tooken into the Ranger corps of 50 and started his Journey to become a legon in history. And in the server starts his journey

What are your Character's ambitions?: To keep the kingdom safe and to be a hero

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): Bow

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Archery

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ): http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/60494/tfr-other/

Other Information about your Character:

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? He would shoot and arrow (from the shadow of the trees after seeing proof) in the ground close enought just to make them jump and scared he steps out and orders them to stop or be tooken to jail if it fails he would soot the one in the knee and as I said he is trained very well cause he never misses a shot or where he aims he already has another on pulled back in seconds and has the guy stop in his tracks.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? I would either ignor him or politlly turn him down and walk away depending on my mood, or if I am in need of some Ill buy some.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: Ill shall ignor it For Rangers don't wear swords and arn't trained in them but would investigat and see who it belongs to, watch over it until someone returns, or if in a hurry will walk away.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?As they don't seem harmful, I ask them for food and pay them for it or if they don't have enough for me I would sneak at night and take a small bit but leave good coin in it's place.(unlikley to happen cause of export navagations.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: I will help but won't accept the coin cause it's my job to protect the Kingdom and and paid a good amount any way.

Anything else you would like to say?: I hope to play and how will I know if accepted?

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Reason:

Your Meta-Gaming definition is slightly wrong.

You have no Power-Emoting definition.

Your OOC definition is wrong,

Your In-character definition is to bland.

Your biography is too short. Try to expand it, maybe continue the story? You should maybe talk about a major event which happened in your characters life. This will help your character building skills so you when you start your role play you will have a good understanding of your character.

Your in-character questions answers are too short. Please give a reason for each answer you stated.

Your Open-Response-Questions are too bland. You need to try and set it out like role play. Use speech with actions so it is like role play in a sense, and show us if you can role play in each scenario. These questions are designed to see how you can handle your character in a role play scenario and test your role playing skills.

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