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[PoppyToppy 0]

Out-Of-Character: PoppyToppy

Minecraft Account Name: PoppyToppy

How old are you?: 15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: London

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Brave, Boastful, and Clumsy dwarf. Always getting self into trouble.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 7 days, 2.5 hours daily (If not grounded from electronics.)

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying to me means playing a fantasy role.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: 2 years of roleplaying.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-gaming is, for example, if a player roleplays a blow to the head, you say *Dodges* or *Miss*.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is: Power-Emoting is, for example, saying "Playername kills playername" without playername 2 saying playername 1 can do that action.

In your own Words, define what Out of Character (OOC) is: OOC is talking, in some cases, talking like this: (You weren't supposed to [action here]).

In your own Words, define what In Character (IC) is: IC is talking normal or in *'s.

What do you expect this server will be like?: An epic adventure roleplay where everyone is (almost) fully nice.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Beast'sMC (found this server) Creative Faction (Shut down) Chosencraft (Boring)

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: I promise.

How did you hear about us?: WikiAnswers

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: No.

In-Character: Silverdew

Character Name: Silverdew

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) : Dwarf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): N/A

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Abandoned by parents when he was 3, Silverdew remains at 56 years old, searching for his mother, Kinderdew and his father, Honeydew.

He appears as a grey-bearded Honeydew. His personality is Brave, Boastful, Kind, and Clumsy, stumbling into traps carelessly.

What are your Character's ambitions?: To find his parents.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): Diamond Shovel (For diggy diggying.)

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Digging holes.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ): HP computer, which means no F5, F2, or F1. :/ I'll edit it in with my Dell laptop later.

Other Information about your Character: N/A

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? Distracts the warriors with food while the Halfling runs away.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? "Nothing, I'm just looking."

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: Take everything out and give it to a poor peasant

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? "What is the trade exchange for some meat?

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: I help, then give the rewards to a poor peasant.

Anything else you would like to say?: No.

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Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied [Correct the X'ed Areas]:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [x]

Insufficient Information in OOC [x]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [x]

Insufficient Knowledge on the World [x]

Open Ended Questions Need Refining [ ]

Illegal Character Abilities [ ]

Unrealistic Events [ ]

-Fabricated Large-Scale Events [ ]

Incorrect Lore [ ]

Power/Metagaming [ ]

Contradicting Statements [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Villain Application Needed [ ]

Incorrect Definitions of Power-emoting [ ]

Incorrect Definitions of Metagaming [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Incorrect Formatting [x]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unlore-ful Skin [ ]

Other Comments: Please PM me for more details.

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