[Denied]Mytho's 2Nd Application.

[Mythosaur 1]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: Mythosaur2

How old are you?: 15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Belguim

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes, compared to others of my country my grammar is relatively good.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: My name is Sander, but people call my Mytho mostly. Most of the time my characters reflect how i am IRL, so i would describe that silent, calm, I don't rage very easily. In general i'm nice to others if they are friendly towards me. I'm also not afraid of joining some action once in a while.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: It depends when i am home, but mostly i'll be on every day.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you : I have been playing RP games for quite some time now, so yes, i do know what RP'ing is. For me roleplaying is acting like a character you made up.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I have played on 2 Roleplay servers before, Crafthammer and Herocraft. I have played WoW, All Elder Scrolls, thats basically it.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Using illegal of forbidden ways to get what the player wants. By example hacking.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is: Telling another player what to do without giving the other player a chance to do anything back. by example RPPVP where Player1 says "Player2 kills Player2".

In your own Words, define what Out of Character (OOC) is: Not RP-ing. Talking as yourself.

In your own Words, define what In Character (IC) is: Roleplaying as your character.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I'v heard great things about it. I already have a few friends here so i expect it to be fun, and give me some great RP experience.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Herocraft : I still play on there, but not as often anymore.

Crafthammer : I left because the maintenance of the server is taking to long, and there is to much drama going on between the Admins with fights that break out once in a while.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: I have, yes and i definately agreed.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes.

How did you hear about us?: Through the players Gemmylou, Mixwhelan and Tankgod (not yet applied)

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/64939-mythos-application/page__p__507456__fromsearch__1#entry507456

In-Character:

Character Name: Svenn

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) : Human.

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): Northener

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

(In case you are unable to view the picture, here is the text version) Svenn is a Northener from a village in the northern snow lands. His father died because of a terrible plague when he was only a young boy. His mother was unable to take care of Svenn because of financial trouble. His mother brought the small child to his uncle Arvar, where he was raised weathly. Nothing was missing there, enough food, enough coin. His uncle taught him how to become a good trader and merchant, because he himself was the the best trader in town. Svenn oftenly went out into the snowy lands and trained with his axe. One day, Arvar followed him to his training area, and watched him fighting with his weapon. He noticed how good he was with it, and the next day, Arvar asked Ysolda, his wife, or Svenn's aunt, to craft him a special axe, for him to train with, as she was a good Blacksmith. They gave him this axe for his 16th birthday. Not a day has passed since then that he didn't have his axe with him.

At age 17, he fell in love with a girl, Carlotta. she was from a very rich family and also in love with Svenn. Her parents forbid her to see Svenn. He was nice, calm and doesn't get aggrevated easily, he also wasn't afraid to throw a punch, he was perfect for her. But words couldn't stop the couple. When her parents found out, she was murdered by mercenaries. Everyone in the village knew it was her parents after Svenn investigated the crime.

3 years after the love incident, he left the village to become a traveling merchant. He arrived at Arethor, and travelled across the Imperial land to sell his merchandise, Word got to him that a terrible snow storm ravaged his town, and that his aunt and uncle disappeared in the storm. Later he finally got a job as the apprentice of a local Blacksmith named Hadvar. He did well as a blacksmith, and was given an amulet by his mentor, A specially crafted amulet that would bring him luck wherever he goes. Hadvar was like a father to him, and Svenn like his son. Hadvar was not one of the youngest people, and died of a heart attack when Svenn was 25. Svenn found the soulles body at the forge, brought it outside of Arethor, and gave him a northern funeral. He sold the Forge as it was his now, and left for the Cloud Temple, ready to start a new life…

What are your Character's ambitions?: To become a wealthy merchant and set up a trading caravan with other people.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): Axe, and fists.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Trading, Axe combat, smithing.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ): (See top of the character backstory image)

Other Information about your Character: Not really.

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? Svenn would go towards the two armed men, and trick them by trying to sell them wares. “Would you two gentlemen be interested is some freshly crafted swords?” In case they both turn towards him, he would signal the Halfling to go, and get to safety.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? He would be rather interested in the wares, and reply "Aaaah, hello fellow merchant! What have you got for sale?". Since he is a merchant himself he'd probably buy a thing or two, depending on the price.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: Svenn would stay at the shack for maybe a day, and if nobody comes to get it, he would take it and sell it, maybe even craft some things with the bars at the nearby forge and then sell it.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you in the common tongue, how do you respond? Svenn approaches the traders, and greets the fellow traders. "Could you spare a loaf or bread or two? I haven't eaten in a while, and I'm a bit hungry." The traders welcome him; as they see his is a merchant and trader just like them. He takes a seat next to the camp fire, and eats the bread. Once he stands up he takes out a coin or two and says "Oh, by the way, here. this is for the food." and would toss the two coins to the closest trader.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: Svenn isn’t a war type, but isn’t afraid to throw a punch either. He would sign up, not to fight, but for the coin it offers. And that of course depends how much coin it is. If it’s a larger budget, then yes, if its smaller, then probably not. He has some merchandise to sell inside the city.

Anything else you would like to say?: If its possible, i'd like my application to be reviewed by everblue2er101, since he was the one who reviewed my last application and told me what to improve.

[nppeck 601]

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied [Correct the X'ed Areas]:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on the World [ ]

Open Ended Questions Need Refining [x]

Illegal Character Abilities [ ]

Unrealistic Events [ ]

-Fabricated Large-Scale Events [ ]

Incorrect Lore [ ]

Power/Metagaming [ ]

Contradicting Statements [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Villain Application Needed [ ]

Incorrect Definitions of Power-emoting [ ]

Incorrect Definitions of Metagaming [x]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Incorrect Formatting [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unlore-ful Skin [ ]

Other Comments: I loved reading your biography, but your metagaming definition is incorrect and your ORQ's need a bit more detail. Add those and you will surely be accepted.

[nppeck 601]

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