[Denied]Rivers Applcation

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Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: Riverpaw

How old are you?: 16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Eastern time zone United states

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a non-troll and love to be nice to people, But ill get mad if i get yelled at slightly. And I'm a bit shy.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 6-7 hours

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Well its like a script but your writing it. So its like a role in a movie you just do what you want. But you have to follow the rules.

What experience have you had in Role-playing, if any?: I haven't had any bad experiences in any role-plays.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Doing impossible out of charecter things while in your charecter while roleplaying.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is: Wells it doing too powerful things that its species or race wouldn't be able to do. Example:

Lilly: Throws knife at lilacs chest.

Lilac: Looks at it and shrugs.

Lilly: Oh gosh that had to hurt.

Lilac acted like nothing happened when the knife hit her.

In your own Words, define what Out of Character (OOC) is: OOC is not IC so it should be ignored and be the minimum size as written in the rules. To do OOC simply add a bracket in front of your writing.

In your own Words, define what In Character (IC) is: IC is in charecter and it should never be broken by excessive OOC or incorrect usage of OOC.

What do you expect this server will be like?: A big roleplaying game with lots of people with nice role players.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have other servers I play on and i haven't left any yet.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes ma'am or sir.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes.

How did you hear about us?: I was watching youtube videos about minecraft server and saw your server.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: This is my third one.

In-Character:

Character Name: River

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) : Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): High elf

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): River is 15 years old and is a light skinned girl,Her hair is chocolate brown and she has light purple eyes. She has lost her parents to an invasion of humans when she was a baby so she was put in a orphanage. Her personailty was sweet and kind, She was also fierce sometimes when someone asked about her parents.

What are your Character's ambitions?: None really

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): A sword.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Acrobatics.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ): http://www.minecraft...girl-link-blue/ Click link Cause my minecraft wont change my skins..

Other Information about your Character: Nothing much.

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? She runs over and stares at them, River bunches up her fist and almost punches them over anger for trying to rob some one. "You better leave him alone!" She growled. Her eyes burned with anger and they seeped into the skins of the warriors. River stomped in front of them and growled.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? "Nothing kind sir." She says. River looked at him with kind eyes, "Heres some money though." She says handing him a gold coin. River walks off with a smile of happiness. Her blond hair flowed in the wind as she ran into the woods.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: She was eager to grab the items but knew they could be anyones Her hand reached out but she slapped herself, "NO!" She thought. "There not mine.." River muttered. So she walks away, She turned her head to look at the hut once again and sighed.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? She hands him a small coin, "May i have some bread." She said in a weak voice. Her hand reached out to one of the traders. They kept saying no so she bent down on the ground and buried her head in her hands. "Why..." She sobbed to herself. Rivers hat swayed gently as she fell to the ground starving.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: She goes and accepts the job and goes to find the bandit. Her sword glinted as the sunshine bounced off, She saw a small village and heard screams. River rushed over, Her hair swayed and she jumped down seeing it was the bandits. She grinned and lept on them her hand reached in her pocket and took out some rope. River roped them and called the guards.

Anything else you would like to say?: No

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Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied [Correct the X'ed Areas]:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [x]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on the World [x]

Open Ended Questions Need Refining [x]

Illegal Character Abilities [ ]

Unrealistic Events [ ]

-Fabricated Large-Scale Events [ ]

Incorrect Lore [ ]

Power/Metagaming [ ]

Contradicting Statements [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Villain Application Needed [ ]

Incorrect Definitions of Power-emoting [ ]

Incorrect Definitions of Metagaming [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Incorrect Formatting [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unlore-ful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:You must add more detail to your biography and ORQ's. Your biography has to be at least two paragraphs for example. Adding server lore is also essential.

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