[Denied]Application Submission 3

[Jkarnes 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: jkarnes

How old are you?: 47

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Central time/ U.S.A

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: skyrim and another server

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: from a category on a skin server

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/69177-my-secon-app/

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!: Yup, all posted! :mrgreen:

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: The act of roleplaying is when you play as a character and act like the character even though the character might be different from you.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Using an external resource like a guide to affect your decisions in-game

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:

Skipping the act of roleplaying and skipping to a pre-determined conclusion. ex. bob kills anyone and never misses

In-Character Details

Character Name: Rocky Forgefire

Character Race: Dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Rocky was born into the Forgefire clan during a peaceful time in dwarf history. As a child he explored the many caverns around Kal' Urguan. Rocky was a great explorer and always found secret caves where he played hide-and-seek with his brother Thor. But he always wanted something more. He loved exploring Kal'Urguan but he almost explored it all!

Eventually he decided to leave the hold of Kal'Urguan at the age of 24. He made it safely to Asulon and explored the Cloud Sanctuary. He learned the ways of the monks and helped them sell their goods. They greatly cared for Rocky and helped him become a strong dwarf by being holy. And the Cloud Sanctuary is where he resides now.

What are your characters ambitions?: To travel Asulon and learn all the races.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: Sorry cant, heres a link to the skin. http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/dwarf-bandoleer-heroes-of-galderon-50-subs/

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character?

No.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? I met a poor dwarf in Arethor today. I bought some of his products. He was so happy that he had me for a supper of ale and bread. I asked him if he wanted to come with me on my adventures but he said he was too old for any adventuring. He did tell me to say hi to his clan if I ever went to Kal' Urguan. I promised I would and slept for the night. In the morn i left.

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I immediately take control of the situation by silencing both the orc and the dwarf.I first ask the dwarf,"What has the orc done to you" The dwarf said the orc called him some names. Then I asked the orc the same question. He answered the same as the dwarf. I said that they should forgive each other and get on their separate ways. They both said "No! Why would I ever forgive him!" Then they started a fist fight. Almost instantly, the dwarf was knocked on the ground. When the monk woke up I told him about the whole situation. He said why are you fighting in the sanctuary! This place is holy!" But they kept fighting. Finally, I challenged them by Wielding my iron battleaxe. They instantly ran away since I looked so intimitdating. The monk thanked me and gave me a sack of minas. Then I got on my way.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: I immediately help the poor man by picking up his minas. Whilst carving a new cane I inquire were he lives and his name. He said his name was Bolden Crackrock and was a dwarf. He gave me half his minas and I guided him to the gates of Malinor. He thanked me and left on his way. I continued my journey.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

You have been denied for the following reasons:

Your biography needs a little more detail. I like how you added lore, just make sure to add more to your biography to show you have a developed character. For your Open Response Questions, be sure to flesh them out more and add dialogue and actions. You're almost there, good luck on your next application!

PM me if you would like further explanation/help.

While you wait…Go and vote for the server to support it!

We all would really appreciate it.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

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