[Denied]ZzKitKatzZ's 2nd Application

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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:ZzKitKatzZ

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:United States

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Very little

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes I do

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I found Lord Of The Craft Through the MC fourms... Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:First off, having fun and acting like what charecter you choose.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: It’s using information your character wouldn’t know to your advantage.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power-emoting is when one individual commits an action that affects another player, without the their consent usually, and is often frowned upon in roleplay communities/situations.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Kyle Mcarth The III

Character Race:Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: I never really had a family. At the age of three my father died in battle against a mighty beast named "Enderman". My mother died a year later after my fathers death because of illness. After my mothers death I was sent to a orfinage in Oren's captile. Were I lived my life for the next 14 years. After my 18th birthday I found out that I had a uncle. So at the moment I am 23 , roaming the land to find my uncle.

We Mcarth's are not the hansomest humans in Asulon. But I am also very strong. I know my way around a sword , and im not scared to kill a man if I haft to. My temper... my tempers baddd. Almost anything can make me angry. But I can be kind at times. After I find my uncle im planning on becoming a shopkeep or maby a knight. Or maby settle down with a wife ((I k theres no wifes im just RPing)) , maby have a kid or two. Have the family that I never had.

What are your characters ambitions?: To find my uncle and after that to become a shopkeep or knight or make a family that I never had.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: http://imgur.com/OZyh0

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:

Open-Response-Questions Baddie Vs. Police

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.Guard attempts to grab Crook.

Crook barely escapes Guard's grasp.

Guard throws a rock in an attempt to trip Crook.

Crook stumbles, and slowly recovers.

Guard tries to force shackles on the Crook.

Crook resists, but is caught.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? *Walks up to the dwarf* , "What do ye have for sale dwarf?"

The dwarf answers "We have weapons , armor and bows." "How much is this sword dwarf? Its very... shinny." Dwarf answers "Its shinny because its made of diamonds as ye can see." " Diamonds?" *Thinks it over* " How much is it?" Dwarf answers "650 minas sir" I answer back "Deal" *Hands the dwarf a large bouch of minas.*

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? *Goes near the two* "This is not a place for fighting!" "Orc whats wrong?" The orc answers "This dwarf dident give me my minas even tho I kill the bandit Sho Ben Swa that he but a bounty on." I answer quickly "Dwarf is this true?" He answers "Yes , but this orc isent getting anything from me!" " Why so?" I answer. "Because this orc killed my friend." says the dwarf. I answer " Dwarf give him his minas or ill help him hurt you!" The dwarf answers quickly " Ok Ok! Heres your minas." *Dwarf hands the orc his pouch of minas.*

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: "Sir are ye ok?" The old man answers "Does it look like im ok!? Im on the ground with my minas everywere!" I answer " Let me him you." *Grabs the minas and puts them back in his bag.* " Want me to find ye a new walking stick?" The man answers quickly " I guess so." *Goes in the nearby woods and finds nice size walking stick* " This one good enough?" I say. The old man answers "Yes its good enough , thank you young man." *Walks away.*

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