[Denied]Angel's app

[Angel_and_Demon 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: Angel_and_Demon

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: USA New jersey Sicklerville eastern standard time

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes I am american

Have you had any previous experience in role-playing servers and if you did why did you,leave?:No.I do Rp....

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules ?: Yes I have and I wish to follow them.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:I saw it on minecraft forums!FOR TEH WIN

are you mature?: Sometimes I am multipersonality and as you know most people with the disorder have a trigger so i might get a little bit...err...sadistic so just a heads up but i do have pills.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: To become a character that is not you and learn how to play him/her. As an example, me playing an Ork but in real life I am not one.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: it is the use of out of game info or method to effect in game play like tactics or language

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: It is making a move that does not allow the other player to make a choice. Example: I block the exits to and from the castle so they can't get out. Therefor we can pick them off of the wall's.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is the act of taking on a character, adapting their personality and traits, and behaving as they would, instead of how you would. Roleplaying, to me, is the opportunity to be who you want to be. I hope thats an accurate enough defenition.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Metagaming is using out of character knowledge whilst in character, for example if someone were to oocly tell you that they want to assassinate someone, using that information IC and telling the person would be an act of metagaming.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: This is just a guess, as I've never heard of this term before, but I would assume that it is doing something that could be called 'overpowered' or unrealistic, perhaps emoting an action that your character wouldn't realisticly be able to do?

In-Character Details

Character Name: Yufi

Character Race: Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Yufi was a young Girl when she wanted to fight with the army. When growing up, she was less interested in books and more interested in swordsmanship and fighting, but she would read the books of Lore and that is the most she got out of reading. SHe has the capability to blend with shadows and kill from a distance but would only resort to that if she HAD to.

Yufi is a hardworking girl and always shares.She never likes to fight people and only fights in self defense.Her favored wepon is a katana/sword.She always Wants to help others when in need and tends to be her weakness.

What are your characters ambitions?: Yufi wants to adventure and learn all about the world

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Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:With a love for his friends he would fight to the death for them.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city.

What is your response?:

I pity the poor man and ask him what he has for sale.I buy some gear and walk off just to keep my travels going.

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?:

I walk up to them and tell them to knock it off and push them away with startling deathglares.

nd. As the monk wakes the large Ork walks off. When the Ork is long gone the dwarf thank's me and walks off. When all is done I go on my root.Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

I help him pick up his money and put it in the ripped puch and help the man up and ask him if he wants help getting home.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

You were denied for the following reasons:

You are lacking length in your Open Response Questions. Please add more deatil in your Open Response Questions, i.e. dialogue, actions and the like. Your Open Response Questions are essentially you in role-play situations, write how you would react. Add some server lore to your biography and improve upon the length. Your application was a good start but in general it could use some fixing up where spelling and grammar are concerned. Good luck on your next application!

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

PM me if you would like further explanation/help.

While you wait…Go and vote for the server to support it!

We all would really appreciate it.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

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