[Denied]Revised app(human) Yufi

[Angel_and_Demon 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:Angel_and_Demon

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Eastern standard time

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes it is my first language XD

Have you had any previous experience in role-playing servers and if you did why did you,leave?:I DO have expirience with role plays but I've NEVER been on a roleplay server.Only a RPG server and i elft because it was to...warzone-ish

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules ?: Yes I have and I wish to follow them.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:I saw it on the more player models forum.

are you mature?: Yes.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: To create your own world and character and play him/her and just let your creative juices flow

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: I don't realy know I'm not very smart...

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Power moting is sealing someone inside an area and killing them off.Like:Sealing a player a in a wall and shotting him/her from the wall.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Yufi

Character Race: Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Yufi is a 16 yearold girl and is friendly despite a dark mysterious past that haunts her.She has Rvaen colored hair and Green eyes.She always uses a sword and is a good hunter.She loves the wilderness and likes to explore making her quite mishivoues[sp].

Yufi just wants to fit in and have friends all over!She likes to train the defensless in the way of the swordsman.Maybe they could start an adventure or will she make a ruckus?Yufi always likes to play with young children making most parents admire her.

What are your characters ambitions?: Yufi dreams to become a famous adventurer and live in the wilderness or a town by the wilderness.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:I put a file here...

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:Yufi protects the innocent and fights for the greater good.Yet her pride can get her in trouble most of the time...

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city.

What is your response?:

I pity the poor soul and look at my money to see how much i can spare.I decide i have enough and I can always do a couple of dungeons or caverns.I walk up to the dwarf and ask him what he has for sale and I notice a sword and ask how much.

"About 7 minnas."

"I'll take it.I love swords!"I chime merrily.I pay the dwarf and he hands me the sword.

"Thank you kind sir."

"Any time."I nod my head and walk off.

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?:

I look at the scene and quikcly run over.

"Oi,Stop it!Vioence isn't the answer!"I cry.The two look at me and glare.

"Keep out o' this girly!"The orc growled and pushed me back and makes a swing for the dwarf.I run over and grab his fist and flip him.

"I said,stop."I hiss darkly.The orc stomps off and the dwarf goes the other way,

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

I run up to the man and help him up.I sit him down on a fallen tree and hand him his coins.I run to find a new stick and find a good sturdy one.I run back and ask if he is ok.After he confirms he is ok i sigh in relief and ask if he would like me to escort him to the next town.

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Need to provide a Meta-Gaming definition. Incorrect Power-Emoting definition. Also add examples of both. You can find more info on the forums and wiki, but make sure to use your own words.

Most Human characters should have last names.

Please greatly expand on the bio and add more details about the character. Incorporate some server lore, which can be found on the forums and wiki.

Powergaming in ORQ #2 by being able to dispatch the Orc so easily.

Expand on all ORQs.

Broken formatting. Use the format from HERE, and be sure not to change anything.

There are some spelling and grammar issues that should be fixed.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[everblue2er101 906]

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