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[darknesslord 0]

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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: roboticsquama17

How old are you?: 11

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: america

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:i have a great grip on them

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: yes

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: PMC

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: role playing is when u adventure usually in the past when you can be a hunter, a warrior, a blacksmith, and other jobs

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: meta-gaming is when a game is when u know some things that would get u an edge in the game but your in game character doesnt know the stuff

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: power-emoting is like when u do something ingame it affects someone else that is playing that same game

In-Character Details

i am the son of the great orc general who has been sent on a mission to travel the world and learn the great skills of all the races

Character Name:Durza

Character Race:orc

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

when i was born i was born with a birthmark. The birthmark was a strange one. it was of a elf riding a horse. so when i grew up i was called the elvenrider. so when i was older i went to a wizard who said he could erase it. So i ask him to do it but it tornd blood red and the sky went dark and then an army of elves on horses came then we barely beat them.

after the battle when we barely one the orc general told to travel the world and learn the trades then teach them to the other orc so when we fight again we will be preapared and maybe we will win without as many troops dying. so then my adventure starts.

What are your characters ambitions?: to learn the skills of every race

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:well i think i would be great in a roleplay server

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? i would ask the dwarf "do u have a family" and if he says yes i would say "well i think u should be able to sell your wares to feed your families" but if he says he doesnt have have a family i would go to an authority and tell them that he is a dwarf0

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? i will go try to break it up and if they are still fighting i would wake up the sleeping monk and tell him about the fight and if he doesn't do anything i would try to knock out the orc to stop him from hurting the dwarf

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: i would help the man up give his coins back and find a good stick for him too wal

[Wizard 125]

Under Review.

[Wizard 125]

Denied.

Biography was not proper length. Include more lore and details of your character.

All your definitions were wrong except for meta-gaming.

You cannot be a jack of all trades.

Your open-response need some serious work.

Please fix your grammar and spelling. You obviously do not have a good grasp of English.

[Wizard 125]

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