[Denied]Mruniverse009's 2nd Application

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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: Mruniverse009

How old are you?: 15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Central Timezone/USA

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Very

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes, I played a bit of WOW, and I played Runescape for about 2 years

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: http://minecraft-server-list.com/server/71124/

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: First App

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: To act as another person/character, usually in a fantastical sense

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Using information that was obtained out of character (OOC) in your roleplay

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: (not gonna lie, I had to look this up) Saying something happened, such as Jack stabs Jill, beetween two players when actually your just forcing the event to happen (that ones really hard to describe, other than through examples)

In-Character Details

Character Name: Doltar Ovnof

Character Race: Dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Doltar is a lively mountain dwarf living in the Dwarven hold of Kal'Alras. His parents were dwarves by the name of Gladthic Ovnof,his father, and Mairit Thokradar, his mother . Doltar inherited most of his traits from his fathers side. He is stout (average size for a dwarf) with light brown hair, brown eyes, and a long dwarvish trumm, of which he is very proud.

Like most dwarfs he has a knack for mining. He often would spend whole weeks out in the tunnels mining for gems, and fighting any creature that gets in the way of his sparkly stones! He was always a natural leader, often organizing the digging in the tunnels so that the most ores can be had. Whilst living in Kal'Alras he would lead parties of the best and most brave of warrior dwarves into the black of night to rid their hold of the horde of undead. Afters a few seasons of leading the raids on the undead Doltar became very skilled with a blade but also very crafty in setting up traps and defense for his hold. He was also never silent when it came to the rule of his home, and due to this during his 31'st season (215 years old) he is kicked out of his hold after a heated argument with the leader of the Goldhand clan over a decision to attack a, seemingly, peaceful orc camp. After being thrown out of his home for 215 years Doltar wasn't sure where to go. He spent his first night in a cobblestone hut in a small forest grove a few miles away from Kal'Alras. He knew that he was going to have to leave and establish a home somewhere else but he didn't want to accept that he had been thrown out and could never return. The next morning Doltar put on his best piece of armor, wielded his sharpest ax, and left all else in a single chest in that hut in the forest. Doltar set off, he didn't know where, but he wanted to find a place where his skills can be used, his ax can be bloody, and a place where he can except it as his new home. Now he needs to find where such a place is......

What are your characters ambitions?: To journey across Asulon finding a new home that both he will need, and one that will need him

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Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: He will befriend most but is almost always the team leader

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

- I decide to venture through the human city of Arethor on my way lands south. I notice a dwarf, almost in rags, with a few bags of wares hes trying to sell, probably to feed himself for the night. I walk up to him and say "good evening dwarf, perhaps I could lighten your load for the day, what do you have to offer a weary traveler?" Shocked that someone is even interested in his sales he replies, "well for a fellow dwarf such as yourself I can service you with some dwarvish pottery I have acquired.It's the perfect addition to your home! Only 253 Minas!" "You must have me mistaken for the settled type, I'm traveling now to find my new home, what I need is a well crafted chest piece or a new ax, mine got chipped splitting the head of a nether beast 3 fortnights ago." I show him the ax. "I could fix that for you for a small fee of 20 minas. My thair could work wonders with metals and taught me a few things about steel, I could fix it now before the sun hits the horizon." I ponder the offer for a bit, "alright dwarf you have a deal, but you must swear by your Trumm that you wont run off with my ax when by the time I return" He replies "I would never betray my Trumm... or a fellow dwarf"

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

-I hear a ruckus occurring not far from the cloud sanctuary temple. I rush over to witness a dispute between a large orc and a hefty dwarf. "You, orc, what business do you have threatening one of my kin on sacred ground?!" The orc turns around with a look of rage and annoyance on his face, which only sharpens at the sight of another dwarf. "Challenge one of your own size dwarf,before I club you to the ground where you belong!" As he turns back around I reply, "I don't think even you would dare commit such an act here, all I have to do is wake the priest's and the full wrath of god and his Aengul's will be on your hide. If you like those odds then go ahead and try, or else leave this place at once, in peace!" The orc releases a few fear inducing grunts then leaves. "Our business is not over halfling"

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

-As the mans stick breaks I quickly try and catch him from his fall. "Are you alright old one?That cane surely wasn't crafted by a dwarf to break so easily as that." I slowly help the man up. Afterwards I grab the bag of minas and replace all the fallen coins in the bag. I hand it back to the man, "here are your minas, I'm sure you wouldn't want to forget that on the road" "thank you" He replies "it is rare to see such kindness on the road nowadays, I wont forget it" I quickly forge a new stick out of strong oakwood and hand it to him "that should work nicely for the road ahead" "this will do just fine, I cant thank you enough, may the road by kinder to you than it has to me"

[everblue2er101 906]

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One thing is preventing this application from being accepted - no working skin screenshot. If you can edit this application and include one within 12 hours your will be accepted. If not, you will be denied.

Pending, awaiting necessary changes. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

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Accepted!

The skin provided has been used on the server many times before, so you may want to adjust it slightly. You could change hair or clothing colours, just to make it more unique.

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