[Denied]Run4484's 1st Application

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Out of Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: Run4484

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT/UK

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I was searching videos on Youtube for Minecraft, then I saw that Petri posted a new video, which was Lord of the Craft. I like the look of it and I wanted to play on it.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: N/A

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum?:Yes

Definition

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is where you being in someone else shoes, to be play a real life scenario and to be someone different. (E.G You are roleplaying as a King, and you have to talk about any topics that happens in Asulon.)

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: In my own words I think Meta- Gaming is where you use a tactical approach on a situation like fighting a war,instead of fighting you could try and find peace between the two kingdoms.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power- Emoting is where you describe a action that take place. (E.G Rhys checks his Money Bag.)

In-Character Details

Character Name: Delvus Dawvain

Character Race: Elf

Character biography -

Delvus was born in Aegis, but at his birth Delvus's Parents moved to the border of Aegis. Then when Delvus was one years of age Delvus's Mum had an terrible accident which ended her life. Delvus's Dad was determined to give everything of what Delvus wants. So he trained Delvus. Delvus's Dad was a Skilled Archer and a Adept Forger.

Delvus is now 44 years of age. His Dad taught him everything he knew like finding Shelter, Hunting, how to use a bow and how to defend yourself by forging armours and weapons. Delvus now look older he has Dark brown hair, blue eyes, a tanned skin and tall pointy ears. He is 6ft high. Delvus is also courageous, funny, kind and loving.

What are your characters ambitions?: To have a adventurous life.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: See Attachment

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: N/A

Open Response Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

Delvus walked happily down the road of Arethor near the Market,then he heard a shouting from a Dwarf. Delvus looked to investigate. Delvus noticed some Arrows, and he checked on amount of Arrows he has left. And Delvus buys a few Arrows and said kindly "Farewell." And continued to follow the path onwards.

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

Delvus will quickly find and wake the Monk up. Then take the Monk the problem. Or quickly go to the Orc and the Dwarf and try to resolve it.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

Delvus walk to the Old Man help him up, and tell him about his bag of Minas fallen and split in half. Then ask to assist him of picking the Minas off the floor for him.

[mmat 7460]

Under review.

[mmat 7460]

- Both your power-emoting and meta-gaming definitions are incorrect.

- There is no skin.

- Delvus could not have been born in Aegis, it would destroyed 50+ years ago and your character is only 44.

- Your biography needs to be more detailed and contain correct server lore.

- You could greatly expand your open response questions.

Correct these errors and reapply in 24 hours.

[mmat 7460]

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