[Denied]TheBioverse's 2nd application

[N/A 5]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:

TheBioverse.

How old are you?:

14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Bahrain, Middle East.

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:

Yes.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:

Yes, DnD PnP, Other Minecraft Servers.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:

Yes.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:

Google

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:

The act of playing a character other than yourself.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:

Meta gaming is the act of making decisions or having discussions unsing info that your character is most likely not to know, Eg: From OOC discussions

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:

Power emoting is when a character does an action and does not give the opposing character the chance to negate that action, Eg: "Guard trips Crook and binds his hands and legs. Crook uses his large strength to break the bonds and runs. Guard sprints to the Crook and tackles him. Crook pulls out a dagger and kills Guard." <<=Found on the wiki.

In-Character Details

Character Name:

Venator_Nocte

Character Race:

Human (No subclass)

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Venator Nocte, Ven to his friends, was born into a family of 2 trades. His Father's side of the family were skilled hunters, while his mothers side were skilled fishers. He was raised in a village on the Isle of Salvus. It was a peaceful time for him and his village, unlike the other human Kingdom's which stank of internal feuding, but the peace was not meant to last. At roughly the age of 20 Ven was an efficient hunter who was well nursed in his father's disipline of hunting, his father had told him, 'We hunt not for the pleasure of the sport, but the cause." His Uncle, on his mother's side of the family, though he was a drunkard, had taught Ven the ways of the fisherman, he always used to say, as if it were his motto, 'Give a man a fish, and he is full for the day, give a man a fishing rod, and he can feed himself for a lifetime.' His parents had also realized that he was now an adult and wanted him to get married and have a family of his own. Ven was amused at the idea and talked his parents not to rush into anything, but they had already found a suitable bride. Ven was shocked, partly due to his shyness, and thought a little time to himself would be just what he would need. He packed his camping bag and went off for the night. It was about midnight and, what he guessed to be chanting and marching, had awoken him. He got out of his tent, sword in hand and peered out of the trees. To his horror the village was in flames, and the chanting was clearer now, he could make out the words "All hail the new King, all hail Godfrey!" Ven was a smart and quick thinker, years of hunting wild animals, and the creatures of the night had gifted him with that skill, and he realized that Godfrey must be the New Ruler of another Kingdom, and that this was war. He ran to his house and found it engulfed in flames, and as he reached he saw them, his family, running for their lives in sheer terror from the soldiers, but father wasn't with them. He saw that his Mother and the others were safe and ran into the house and found his father on the floor, dead. He was also holding a bloody note, on it in a scribbled and rushed writing said, 'Ven, if you find this note, then I have passed on to the heavans, bet this is no time to be grieving in tears, your family needs you, it is now your responsibility to protect and feed them, live up to your name, that is all I ask. Take my finest armor, my battle sword, my crossbow, and my quiver of arrows, they shall serve you well, now go, destiny awaits you, your family awaits you. Ven shook the tears from his eyes, grabbed the equipment his late father had bestowed upon him, and ran to protect the family. He ran to the door and dashed through the chaos. He managed to cut down a few soldiers just like he would cut down a stampeding wild boar. He found his family in the woods, exhausted, and as he extended his hand and was about to call out for them, when he heard the words "Detonate the mines!" and a shining bright light engulfed his family as Ven was knocked off his feet, and his world faded to black. When he woke it was dawn and he was under a small pile of rubble, when he emerged to the surface he found himself in crater, and he realized what had happened. He looked back to the village to confirm his hunch, and as he had gravely suspected, it was gone, and so were the soldiers. His knees gave out under him and he collapsed, tears welling up in his eyes, realizing he could not confirm his father's wishes, that he had doomed the families name. It was midday and Ven had constructed a makeshift grave from what he could find and said his prayers, he the took the decided to travel to the cloud sanctuary with what little money and food he had left, for the armor had taken the force of the blast and was now in pieces, his sword was still in decent shape at least, he thought. He then began his journey of hardship, no idea what destiny awaited him...

What are your characters ambitions?:

To become a great hunter and a skilled fisherman.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:

He tends not to get mixed up in other people's business, keeps to himself, sly, and horrible at romance, not that he fancies at all.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

Ven walks through the front gates of the mighty city, and is glad too see the marketplace, due to his loss on equipment and more importantly, food. He walks up to the first shop and sees a poor dwarven seller, and realizes he could get a good bargain. He haggles for a while and pays the man for some fresh melons and steak, he also buys the local tabloid too catch up on recent event's that he could possibly for his own gain, he finds an opening job as a night guard, and in his good spirit, tosses the poor seller an extra coin and goes on his way.

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

Ven is on a shift, after accepting the job of night guard, and comes across the argument. Normally, he would have not tampered and woken up the nearby monk to deal with the situation, but as a night guard it was his duty to sort these problems, he reckoned he might even get in the captain's good books by doing so. He casually walked up to the scene and addressed the 2, 'Is there a problem here?' They both tuned their menacing eyes towards him, and the dwarf said 'And what if there is a problem, what are ye gonna do?' The Orc added, 'Hah! Puny man can do nothing!' Ven kept his cool and offered both of them a cool beer he had in his satchel, they both agreed. After they had drank they were grateful to Ven. 'Sorry mate, I didn't to be so rude to ya.' the dwarf said ashamed, the Orc the added 'Puny man has good beer!' Ven only smiled, and in seconds the both had collapsed. Little had the 2 known Ven had especially brewed the beer extra strong for such a situation, and knew no one refused a cool beer. At dawn when the monk had awoken, Ven explained the situation. The monk was impressed at his use of cunning and not violence to handle the situation, and gave him a small fee for it. 'All in a day's work, sir.' Said Ven with a grin.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

Ven is calmly enjoying a stroll from work and decides to be a bit more active and walks down the road to Malinor, to treat himself to a cold pint of beer for his great job as a night guard, when he sees an old man with a walking stick pass by him. Ven notices the walking stick is incredibly unstable, and as he is about to stop and warn the old man, the stick snaps, and his pouch of minas rips and coins spill out. He quickly takes action by helping the old man up and hands him the stick he had been using previously to help a small child untangle a kite from a tree. He also collects all the minas, and slyly keeps one for himself as a compensation. The old man thanks him and as he begins to walk away, Ven has an risky idea. He stops the old man and tells him of the 1 minas he had kept for himself and humbly apologizes while bowing his head, and the man as Ven had gambled, rewarded Ven with the minas and a few more for his honesty. Ven put on a mask of being modest and in the end took the money. As the old man walked away he felt a sense of pride for being so cunning, and continued his walk to Malinor, and spent the money on is beer too.

[Lita 677]

• Lore inconsistency: The Temple has no guards.
• Your bio was a wall of text, if you could separate the paragraphs and indent that would be fabulous.

Remember to wait (24) hours before reapplying, and to always try, try again! It was a good app over all.

[Lita 677]

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