[Denied]RedMage App Form 3

[RedMage 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: Devinator19

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: USA Eastern time/Michigan

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes but it could use improvement

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes In some Larp and Video games.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes and I agree with the rules.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: Internet search RP Minecraft Server

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/70982-redmage-app-form/ and http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/71041-redmage-app-form/

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!: I Will right after this.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Acting in a Role with real Emotions and staying in character.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: To use a Skill/Info learned from a real life scenario and using it in a Role Playing game scenario.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Saying or typing your facial expressions "RedMage winked at the fine maiden"

In-Character Details

Character Name: RedMage

Character Race: Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Larry Gowl was born in Kwaszar a small place in the Alklieson Region his Father Lord Cencus and his mother lived in a big home near the River of Klick. His mom died when he was 8 his father raised him as his father did. When Larry was 19 his father died he live by himself in Kwaszar, But not being able to afford his parents nice home he had to get a job at a brewery as an apprentice.

One day Larry was mixing a new ingredient with gunpowder the potion exploded and stained the wood red he was called the RedMage by a traveler who bought some potions as the accident happened.The Name spread and stuck with Larry So he Officially changed his name to Red Gowl Mage. He set off into the new land of Asulon looking for a fine maiden and a new job to start a family of his own. He would rather help then hurt. He is a master at Brewing and Archery. . He is 6ft tall at 22 and weighs 130 pounds. He has a Bow and Arrow at all times. He wears a Black and Brown Robe with a Dagger on his side. Has Brown hair and Brown eyes. He has no enemies and is good to all kinds of races.

What are your characters ambitions?: Having a Family,And Making a Living

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: No I explained myself well I presume.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? As I stumbled upon the dwarf I asked if I could help him in any way? He replied “Yes can you buy these?” I replied “No but I can help you sell them.” I took his wares and offered it to a man I had helped a week before. And asked the dwarf “What will you do with the money?” he replied “Buy a drink.” So I told him He could use it to make more money and bought him a lot where people would think hes more official and organized It turns out he was a packrat and he sold all the things he didn't need and then bought a house and made a family.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I would attempt to calm the Orc down but if I couldn’t I don’t know what I would do.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: I would pick up the all the coins and empty my coin bag into my robe. Then I would put Every coin in the back and Walk him to a place where he could sit. I would give his money back and ask him politely to stay put. I would walk to the Market and buy a new cane and a new money sack. I would put my money in the new sack and give him his new cane. Then I would do whatever possible to make him happy and tell him to think about putting all that money into a bank.

[Wizard 125]

Under Review.

[Wizard 125]

Denied.

Power-emoting definition wrong. Think about it like power-gaming.

Bio needs correct server lore according to your race. You can't just make up random places.

2nd OR needs to be much longer. You need dialogue in the 2nd and 3rd questions.

[Wizard 125]

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