Eyes414's Application #1

[Eyes414 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: eyes414

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: United States

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes, in and out of Minecraft Servers

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: Google

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: This is my first.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!: I will post it after this.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Taking a role in someone other than yourself.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Strategy, anything done outside of the game that your character may not know.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Making what you are doing clear without any emoticons or animations.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Nerosain

Character Race: Elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Nerosain was born in Arethor by a very poor family, after long, Nerosain's father found out he did not have enough mina's to raise Nerosain. After long his father decided to flee the poor life he had and go to Normandor and start a new life, leaving Nerosain and his poor mother alone in Arethor, leaving them only a bundle of bread and a small sack of minas. Nerosain's mother decided she could do better than to be a beggar , so she became a farmer. Nerosain took over his mother's roll of beggar, he seemed to have made more money than his mom did as a beggar, because he was a child. By age 12, Nerosain decided its time he did something more, so he wandered into The Wilds and fletched himself a bow and some arrows, Nerosain continued to hunt, and sold the food for money, so after many years of labor, Nerosain and his mother made enough money to buy his mother a new house.

At age 20, Nerosain is going off to start his own adventure. While walking on the Oren road, he gets mugged for all of his food and clothes, he awakens alongside the road, naked and hungry, he continues walking, when a generous man finds him and gives him some clothes, food, and some minas. Nerosain now has no memory of anything besides basic tasks. He seeks fortune and respect in this world, now, all new to him.

What are your characters ambitions?: To become a widely renown treasure hunter.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: http://imgur.com/Z02WM

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: Nerosain is a rather generous man with plenty of ambition.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? "Excuse me sir, but may I ask what you are selling?" I ask, "Tools and food at a very low price, won't you please buy my wares?". *Politely looks over the man's items he has for sale* "How much for this wooden sword?" I ask. The man replies "Two minas is all I ask for." *Thinking about the offer* "I will give you 20 for the sword!" *The dwarf looks up at Nerosain with delight* "Thank you, thank you very much sir!" I gently smile back and I am on my way once more.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? *Walks over the the men as they argue* "Is there a problem here?" I ask, *The orc explains that the dwarf was not paying enough attention to road, and tripped on his leg* I ask "Don't you think that is a silly thing to threaten someone about?

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: *Reaches down and help the man up* "Are you alright sir?" I ask, the man replies "Yes, yes i will be fine, please will you find me another walking stick?" *I fetch a rather sturdy stick lying on the ground about as tall as the man* "Will this work?" *The man balances himself on the stick and approves of it* "Yes this is great, thank you so much young man" *The elderly man tries to hand me 5 minas* "Will 5 be enough for your troubles?" asks the man, *Pulling out 5 coins and hands them to

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

You must post your application on the MCForums thread as well before you can be accepted.

Meta-Gaming definition needs to be expanded. Incorrect Power-Emoting definition. Add examples for both. Expand on these and the Roleplaying definition. You can find more info on the forums and wiki, but make sure to use your own words.

ORQ #2 needs to be expanded.

ORQ #3 seems to be incomplete.

Overall a very good first attempt.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[everblue2er101 906]

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