[Denied]Whitelist Application: Drago1128

[Drago1128 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:Drago1128

How old are you?:14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:EST United States

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes, Fluent, but not that good at spelling, if i mess up at spelling i always correct myself, if it means alot i will take my time, just becasue of rp :)

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:With my friends, not in an official server

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes :)

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:Friend

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:None

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!: No, But i will if neccicary

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Taking control of a character, and using it in a factasy world, where you decide what happens

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: If you know something your character should not know. And take it to and take it to your advantage

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Forcing somebody to do something.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Drago

Character Race:Humans

Character biography: Drago was born in human civilization. He Was raised in it. Along with His 3 brothers. When Drago was a young kid, Galador a young elf and Drago were best friends.

His father died when he was 9, along with one of his 3 brothers. His mom took care of him, But ironically at age 13 His mother died,His brothers moved away and left drago, Drago had no choice

But to become a Guard for his local city. After a while he became the captain of the guard, for about 5 years. But one day 3 men rode into town and took all of his belongings.

And told lies to the king, and residents of the city, Drago was stripped of his ranks and had no choice but to run away from his city at age 15, he went to go live with his best friend Galador.

Together they lived deep in the woods and hunted off of trees with their bows, Drago became very skilled with his bow, but still very trained with his sword, at age 20 Galador and drago moved in with the dwarfs

to learn their fighting syles and learned to fight with a axe. Drago then moved out of being with galador and tried to find his 2 brothers, after 3 years or searching he had no prevail.

Galador and Drago now have met up again and are ready to take on the dangourous world together.

What are your characters ambitions?:To become a king, Emporer, Or just to rule the rule the world.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? I give the dwarf some gold for his journies, and armor,

enough for food water also. Hopefully he shall thank me and go on his own way, while he's off being very happy i steal small stuff he was selling, that he won't miss.

Anything valuable i'll give to a poorer person.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?: Drago would take out his sword

and defeat the Orc, The dwarf would be so thankful and hopefully give me money, if he does not, I shall pickpocket some of his gold.

For I just saved his life and i desearve some gold.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: Drago picks up the poins secretly take out 50 and give the rest to the old man

Then i fetch his another stick, then I take him to town, and buy him a real cane that will not break as easy. I give back 10 coins so he thinks i am paying him, when i am really taking 40.

[mmat 7460]

- Your power-emoting definition could be clearer and more detailed.

- Your biography should be more detailed and have server lore in it.

- No skin.

- Your grammar and spelling could be worked on.

- Please post on the MCforums thread as well as this one.

- Your open response questions need to be expanded.

Correct these errors and try again 24 hours.

[mmat 7460]

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