Seth151's App

[Hollowkira 36]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: Seth151

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: (UTC-08:00) Pacific Time/Calfonia

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes I do

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes I use to play on the server herocraft but got bored of it really fast.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes I have read your rules and I do agree.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: When I was trying to look for lord of the rings.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: Sorry I don't have any.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! : Ok

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is, fundamentally, becoming one with your character. To roleplay means that one must

take the responsibilities, necessities, and desires of their character into account.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta-gaming is geting info that was given while in out of character like saying "Dose anybody know where the dragon and can you give me the cords".

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power-Emoting is using something that is disproportional to normal power limits. A person who "power-emotes" would likely *cast a spell that paralyze everybody who opposes them* or *teleport to a place where danger is not immenent*. Using an unrealistic amount of power to defeat enemies stronger than you would be considered power-emoting. Assumed instant kills, invincibility, flying, and magic would all be traits of PE.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Thane Everstone

Character Race: Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Thane comes from a small town by a big ocean the place is not that populated.Thane was a young boy when hes father died from a attack from a rival town Thane's mother died when at birth.Thane didn't have anyone to count on any no one to look up to Thane has a brother but hes brother left four years ago and never showed up again so Thane thought the worse.Thane wanted to become what hes father once was hes father was the paladin of the town Thane's brother was the knight of the town Thane wanted to help people but while he was training with his father the rival town attack leaving no tracks.Once Thane woke up he saw hes father laying dead next to him hes father's last words was "Son this is your destiny you weren't supposed to die today I was you must live on our family name this is the end of my destiny but the beginning of yours Now son go in the basement you will find what you need when your" Then he died.Thane didn't know what to think after what he just saw so thane ran to get help but no one was around to help so Thane ran into the basement then when he was in there he heard footsteps walking then Thane saw a chest with hes name on it so he opened it and there was a note saying "Son if your reading this you have chosen your path you will live to become a great paladin." Thane got the sword and shield out of the chest and got out the basement and then the bandit walks by and says "Hey! we got a live one" so Thane clenches hes sword then attacks the bandit but not doing very much damage to the bandit's amour then the bandit grabs Thane and says "We got a brave one here" Then just in time Thane's older brother comes bashing in the house then stabs the bandit in the back killing the bandit.Thane's brother says "Thane go to the shed your friend Alric and some others are there don't worry i got them as Thane ran to the shed he saw hes brother get corned by lots of bandits then come out without a scratch Thane thought to himself I wish I could be that strong. As Thane walks in the shed everyone stares at him he learns about everyone's name His friend Alric and two others Axel and Leonardo then we all slept in the shed that night then the next day a ship arrived at the dock then a strange old man with a giant hammer on his back he stands before me,Alric,Leonardo,and Axel and says "Would you four like to go on a adventure of a life time remember you will never come back here so make wise decision". As we all get on the boat we see a boy by the name of Xuthus he says "Welcome we will be working together alot" then the boat leaves the dock.

What are your characters ambitions?: To become a paladin so he could save everyone.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: http://imgur.com/LvirW

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: He has great coordination with swords but he is really skilled with a sword and shield.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? Thane says "Hello may i have something to drink I will give you twenty silver i don't want the change i'm sure you need more then I do.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? Thane runs up to the Orc and Dwarf and says "Stop you don't need to fight what ever happened can be solved through talk but if you two still want to fight I will attack as well"

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: Thane grabs the old man then sets him on a wall for a minute then grabs all the coins puts it in the bag then gives it to the old man then takes him to the closes woodworker in town to buy him a new walking stick.

[Lita 677]

• ORQs in general need work. Lengthen, write them out as if you were actually roleplaying with someone.
• Your biography was nearly impossible to read. Work on grammar, end sentences with a closing mark, and use some pronouns.
• Your third ORQ is powergaming, you can't just pick someone up and set them on a wall. They wouldn't let you.

[Lita 677]

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