Goodwizard Application

[Erik_Bokin 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:goodwizard

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Mountain Time

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:I think I do, just kidding of course I do.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:I've played of many roleplaying servers and my cousins and I are real nerds...

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:yes, of course, and did I say yes?

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:I found the server on Planetmincraft.com

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/73831-goodwizard-applications/

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :yes I have but my username on there is 899mew(its an old account)

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:A way to leave real life and make a new world. A way to just have fun and make new friends or a new life in one's mind.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Useing Out of Charater info to the roleplayer's benefit. Some examples: seeing some ones name tags throught a wall, hearing a sound underground, ect.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:While roleplaying forceing another player or "roleplayer" to do an action. some examples: Rping, that you stabbed and killed, wounding, or forcing him or her to fall off a wall.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Mason Nyle

Character Race:Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:Mason was born in a small village of farmers, miners, and forgers. He didn't really like his life in the town becuase it was very quite, plus Mason looked the same as every one esle. Everyone had brown hair and green eyes. He wished of leave the town and going to Arethor or Riven becuase those were the closes towns. Life was very ordinary and Mason longed for adventure. The only things he did were mine at the "Shaft" becuase luckly he was fifthteen and thats when you were able to get a job, and some times the market to haggle with his new ores and or ingots. On his sixthteen birthday his parents were able to leave the village and go on his way. He knew bandits lived in the woods so before he left he bought food, a dagger and some throwing knifes to protect himself in case of any bandits come near him. On his way to any town, He heard a scream from the forest and say a little girl, and her father maybe, being attacked by three bandits. they noticed that he only had a dagger and they had swords and one had a bow. The two attacked him and the one with the bow stayed so the girl and her father didnt escape. one of them sliced at him and he pulled out a throwing knife and throw at the bandits head. Missing the bandit's head but hiting his shoulder instead. The bandit in pain droped to the floor in agony. Fastly Mason pulled out two throwing knifes and threw them at the other bandit looking at his friend in pain. The two daggers hit the other bandit in the leg and arm. The bandit droped even more quick them the other bandit. he ran over to them, pulled out the knifes and took there swords and threw the swords at a tree. The final bandit looked at him and ran seeing he would be his next victim. "thank you so much" said the man as they ran. Looking around he forgot were the road was. He was lost, for awhile he wondered the forest intil he found Cloud Temple.

What are your characters ambitions?:To join a town, meet new poeple, and have a great life.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:In old app's attachment

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:He loves to have an adventure

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?I noticed something odd about the man. I knew he was Dwarf but why would he come here to a human city to sell wares? I look to see if anything of use is in the shop and all I see is picks, metals, and jewlery. nothing in the shop impressed me so I walk along. Thinking of why the man was here.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?I notice them about to fight. I dont want to get into the fight myself. I run to a nearby bush and find some rocks on the ground. I hide behide the bush so if they see hat im about to do I'll be hidden. I throw a rock at the orcs head. It sores over the orc's head but hits the ground. He sees that nothing naturall could have done that so we walks around to see where it had come from and forgets about the dwarf. The dwarf runs as fast as he can and the orc just stands there and watches. "that criminal was in my hands and he slipted right through them, to bad" says the orc.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: I hurry and run over to the man and help him up. He falls again and I make him sit up. I run to a nearby tree, and break a branch off. "here, use this as a cane for now" I say and hand him the branch. I notice the Minas and run to them. "hey you droped some Minas here" I tell the man. He thanks me for being so kind and grabs the Minas. He walks off walbing a bit and goes on his way.

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

I still cannot find your application on the Minecraft forums. Please provide a link in your next attempt.

Slight powergaming in the bio, defeating the bandits so easily. Alter the bio so that it's at least two paragraphs.

Please reattach your skin to each application, this keeps the server records straight.

Expand on the first ORQ. They should all read as stories, with action and dialogue.

There are still numerous spelling mistakes.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[Taiga 764]

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