iRtheCreeper's Application

[iRtheCreeper 20]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: iRtheCreeper

How old are you?: 15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Eastern Time

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes, I do.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Well, I have played on other servers, so yes.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes, I have read them, and I agree.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:I googled minecraft rpg server.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:none

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: Yes. http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Taking on the role of a character that you would not usually be able to be. You do not only experience this character, but also his or her relationship with other characters in a whole community.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:when you use information that is given in game, though a real person would not know that information, such as going into a room because you see a name through a wall.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: roleplaying in a way that gives an unfair advantage, such as giving the action and outcome in the same text.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Elenvor

Character Race:Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:Elenvor is a 6'2 male human. He is 20 years old. He is very muscular and wears a green tunic and basic wool pants. He has black hair and black eyes. He has a kind heart, yet is incredibly hyper active to the point of annoyance. He is determined to make it on his own like his father did. His preferred weapon is an ax, and is a skilled fighter.

He was raised as a blacksmith. His mother died at a young age, giving birth to him. His father trained him to wield a sword, farm, and forge throughout his childhood. Elenvor went on a trip to the market like every other day, but when he returned, he saw his father pinned down by a large tree limb. Seeing no other choice, he decided to take all the things he owned and leave. He is now looking for a place to settle down. He would also like to apprentice at blacksmithing or a more practical trade.

What are your characters ambitions?:to find a home to settle down in.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: attached.

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: No.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? I ask what wares he is selling. He says that he has ores from the mines and jewels from distant lands. I look them over to see if I might need anything that he is selling. Seeing a bag of iron ingots that could be of use of in blacksmithing, I ask him how much. When he says 20 Minas, which is much more than I would pay for them, I accept because he is having trouble making his way in the city. I buy them and leave to get back on my way.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? Having a kind heart, I pity the dwarf and decide to help him. I walk up behind the Orc, standing plenty over him, and tell him to stop. He ignores me and pushes the dwarf to the ground. I then pick up the Orc and throw him down, asking him if he liked it. He then gets up to confront me, but is scared by my size and turns and walks the other way. I help the dwarf to his feet and he thanks me. I say it is good to help others and send him on his way.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: I help him up and lean him against a tree. I then, go into the forest and find a branch for him to use as a temporary walking stick. He thanks me and is about to go on his way when I tell him he dropped some money. I pick it up for him and he gives me a Minas for my help. He thanks me again, and we both go on our ways.

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Reasons for Denial:

-Your skin is not attached, rather than attaching it as a file, simply upload it to a site like Imgur, and then use the BBCode tags, .

-Your biography is short and lacks detail about your character's history. Why did he decide to leave? The exact nature of his leaving isn't well-explained enough.

-The second ORQ response is rather powergamey, I understand that your character is large and quite strong, but an Orc would be at least twice that. Simply picking him up and throwing him on the ground wouldn't be possible, as not only are they bigger, but their entire society revolves around combat, making him a very skilled fighter.

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