[Denied]Dragonskull's Application

[Dragonskull 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: Dragonskull80

How old are you?: 16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT+1

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes, it is my second language.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes. I am playing roleplay everyday. But i want to play on a good RP server :)

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: From a friend.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: This is my first app!

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! : Yes

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying in my words, is when you create a character and playing his life in a game.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta-gaming in my words, is when you are using knowledge outside of you characters knowledge to improve game play of your character.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power Emoting is where you do something not allowing the other person to stop it, like killing someone without giving them a warning.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Jack Morrow

Character Race: Wood Elv, Male

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Jack was born deep in the forest. His dad was killed when he and his mother was hunting for food. Jack was only 1 century. A half century later Jack's mother was killed by an orc. And Jack was on his own. Jack who was trained by his mother and father was a very good on the bow. So he fixed food for himself.

Later that century an elven clan passed by his forest and he followed them, and his goal was to revenge his parents.

Jack looks like a ordinary elve, pointy ears, long green hair. Jack never miss a chance to help, he thinks it is greater chance to find the killer of his dad, or kill a orc. Just never remind him about his parents, he will fire some arrows on you. Jack is 3 centuries old, and is still looking for revenge.

What are your characters ambitions?: To revenge his parents.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: Nope ^.^

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

I walk up to his shop asking if he has a bow. He answers "Yes my dear elve".

I ask for the price and the dwarf says "90 minas" I pay the dwarf and leave with the bow. Behind me I can see the dwarf continue to sell his wares.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

I see the large Orc and in less then two seconds I am pointing my bow at the Orc's head. And I whisper so only the Orc and the Dwarf hears me "You don't want to do that". I feel the hate bubble in my body, and for one second I thought I would shoot him. But instead the Orc grunts and walks away. With the eyes starring at my bow.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

For one second I was on the way to help the man.

But then I remembered...that I really need some Minas. And I run towards him and picked up the coins and run away.

Some days later I felt sorry about the man. And walked back to Malinor and after one hour of searching I found the man and gave back his Minas.

[Queen of Aegis 174]

- Biography is too short

- Killed parents is overused

- 1sr ORQ is too short

- 2nd ORQ is too short, and is slightly powergaming. An orc would not simply walk away grunting because an elf would point a bow at him

- 3rd ORQ is too short and lacks dialog

- villainous acts are forbidden without a VA. That includes stealing, which you showed in the 3rd ORQ. You may

apply for a villain application after being accepted on the server for one full week

- It is 'elf' and not 'elve' or 'elv'

You may reapply in 24 hours from this post

If you have any questions feel free to PM me

~BoomBox

[Queen of Aegis 174]

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