[Denied]Dragonskull80's Second Application

[Dragonskull 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: Dragonskull80

How old are you?: 16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT +1 (Sweden)

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes, it's my second language.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes. I am roleplaying everyday. But i have never played on a good RP server.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes, sir.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: From a friend.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/77343-dragonskulls-application/

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? Of course.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying in my words, is when you create a character and playing his life in a game.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta-gaming in my words, is when you are using knowledge outside of you characters knowledge to improve game play of your character.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power Emoting is where you do something not allowing the other person to stop it, like killing someone without giving them a warning.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Jack Morrow

Character Race: Wood Elf (Male)

Character biographys history: Jack was born in the deep forest in a small elf clan. He was like any other elf, pointy ears, long green hair.

He was teached by his father. They used to hunt with eachother. Jack was so bad with the bow that his dad almost stopped teach him, but they continued and after a while Jack become a really good archer.

Jack had a great childhood, and he was the biggest reason the elf clan had food everyday.

But in one hunt trip he got lost. And where ever he searched he could not find his clan.

Jack saw a road, and followed it. On the way he saw a human-shopkeeper, and he asked him if he knew about any elf clan.

But the shopkeeper just said "No, sir. I've never heard about any elf clan here." And Jack walked slowly away. He was thinking of his father and mother. What would they say?

3 years century later Jack went to a big city and there he found another elf clan. But they were not wood elfs, they were High Elfs. It was not the same as before. But Jack thought it was better then nothing.

From the beginning most of the elves did not like that Jack was there. But after some weeks they wanted to be friend with him. And Jack nicely did not mention that they some weeks before did not like him that all.

2 years later Jack went of to find his old clan again. He did not find them this time either.

Jack was starting to worry that he would never find his clan. But he would not give up. 1 year of searching, without finding any trace of the clan Jack went back to the city where he found the High Elf clan. But this time he did not find any elf clan.

And all of his Minas were almost gone. When a rich human passed by. Jack asked if he could follow him. And the human answered "Well..okay. If you really need to" and Jack went after him.

Jack lived with the humans in a half century before he started to miss his clan again. And he went off again.

And just as the other times he could not find his clan. Jack now thought it was best to begin his own journey, but he would as fast as possible search for his clan again.

Jack is a very kind person, who wants to help as many he can. He don't care if it is a orc or whatever. If he can, he will help them.

But Jack can be really annoying sometimes, but never tell him that. He will get angry, and maybe shoot some arrows at your feets. Jack is now four centuries old.

What are your characters ambitions?: To find his clan and parents.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: No, I don't think so.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

When entering the city of Arethor I see a shopkeeper selling his wares. First I think he is like any other shopkeeper, but when I gets closer I see it is a poor dwarf.

I walk up to him and i'm asking if he has a bow. He answers "Yes my dear elf." I answer faster then it was ment to be so it sounds strange; "How much?"

He answer me "65 Minas". I am about to pay him when I see that I only got 50 Minas. I decide to tell him. And he answers "Well..if you give me that necklace, you can get it for 50" he says and points on my neck.

The necklace whas the only thing I got left from my old clan so instead i just give him 10 Minas and begins to make a conversation with the dwarf.

The dwarf laughs when I told him a joke and then says "Bye, hope we meets again", I say goodbye to him and he laughs again.

I smile when I walks away, and i'm thinking of all good people there is in the world. And without being able to stop myself, I laugh.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

When i'm walking down the Oren Road enjoying the great silence I see a big Orc threatening a small nearby dwarf. I walk up to the Orc and the dwarf and asks nicely "Is there any problem here?"

The orc just grunts and hits me on the nose. I fall down on the street, but i'm fast up on my feets again. The Orc pulls out a sword, and I pull out my new bow.

"Sir you don't want to do that!" I say. The Orc just grunts and hits me on the nose again. I fall once more. And before I am ready the Orc has stabbed the dwarf in the shoulder.

I try to shoot the Orc in the leg but I miss. I shoot again and this time the Orc falls. The Orc limping away from the road. I help up the dwarf and asks if he is okay. "Okay? Okay?! Are you blind? I got stabbed in the shoulder, of course i'm not okay!"

I escort the dwarf to a healer who fixes the shoulder. Then I say goodbye to the dwarf when I leave. Thinking that I've made something right today.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

I see an old man fall to the ground. And very fast I help him up, and he says "Thanks dear elf". I offer him my old bow until he finds a better stick. But he just says "No, no dear elf. No no". I give him all of his coins, then I ask him where he lives and he points on a old house. I help him there.

When we are at the door someone opens it and screams "Grandpa! Stay here" it was a little girl. She went in to the house again, when she was back, she had a stick and gave it to her grandpa. The old man thanks me one more time the he goes in to the house. And the little girl says "Thanks" and closes the door.

I laugh. Because I love to help people!

[steelersfan1221 300]

Reasons:

• Your definitions are well written, and have no flaws.
  
• Your biography is a good length, but the entire biography is lacking server lore. There aren't really any elven clans in our lore. Also, you need to use proper city/location names. For example, the High Elven City is called Haelun'or.
  
• Your ORQs are a bit un-realistic. First off, dwarves do not talk with that kind of language. They talk like thugs, basically. An example would be, "Oi lad, pass te' mead over 'ere." I suggest you redo all three of the ORQs.
  
• Think about medieval times. A little girl would probably not say something like "Grandpa stay here!" Try to make it more realistic.
  
• Also, a four century year-old elf is VERY old, even for an elf. If you want to play a teenager, I recommend somewhere from 110-180 years of age.
  

[steelersfan1221 300]

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