[Denied]Imageaudio's 2Nd Application

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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:imageaudio

How old are you?:17

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Central time/United States

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Yes

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:I heard about LOTC on Planet Minecraft.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/77384-application-for-imageaudio/#entry649140

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is the act of pretending to be a made up character in a fantasy situation.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta gaming is using out of game information to make decisions in game.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Power-emoting is guessing how someone will act, and continuing on without letting them explain or chose how they react to the situation.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Urhal Frostworm

Character Race:dark elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Urhal Frostworm grew up in the icy lands of Frostworm where his family rules over the land. His hair is white as snow and his skin is a shade of a grayish blue tint. He has dark red eyes. Urhal is 5'10 and has a slim and agile build. The Frostworm family has a unique ability to see in the dark. His family had him apprentice under many masters as he grew up so he has a varied skill set but has yet to master any of them. His skill set includes experience in fields such as archery, magic, alchemy, and sword fighting.He is the age of 23 and is looking for adventure. Being from noble decent Urhal is a bit stuck up sometimes and feels as if he's better than others. Urhal is quick to jump in a fight but has no prejudices against any race. Urhal grew up always fulfilling his parents wishes so he never got to experience friendship during his childhood. The closest thing he had to friendship were his apprenticeships. Although Urhal doesn't like to admit he wants a friend, he is often lonely and secretly wishes he had a companion to travel with him on his ventures. Even though Urhal is a bit stuck up and prideful he is often kind to those in need and lives under principles similar to chivalry. He always comes to the rescue of a maiden in distress or to the weak. He always aids the poor when he can.

What are your characters ambitions?: His main goal is to have adventures worth remembering and finding a true friend.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: I attached a file with a screenshot.

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: No

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? As i arrive in the city of Arethor i stop and notice something odd. In the mist of all the towering figures walking among the city there is one that stands out. Its a dwarf and a poor looking one at that. I approach him and say "What are you selling?" He replies, "Anything that's on this table is for sale. Please take a look and ask if you have any questions." I'm not really in need of any new supplies but I figure I should help this man out. After all at least he's working to make a living rather than begging every passerby. I browse for a minute until my eyes stumble upon a fine Dwarven dagger. I ask, "How much for this?" He replies, "I'll only ask for 20 gold pieces." I was surprised. I've seen a dagger similar to this one in another city but it was for 50 gold pieces. Even someone in poverty was trying to be kind to me. I decided to buy the dagger and gave him 60 gold pieces. I emptied my coin bag but it was the least I could do for someone trying to be kind to me.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I approach the dwarf and orc and ask what the problem is. The orc thunders, "This thief stole my gold ringback there on the path. The dwarf exclaims in self defense, " I am no thief. I earn an honest living at my shop in Arethor." I soon recognize the dwarf the dwarf as the one that sold me the dagger back about a month ago. I tell the orc that I know this dwarf is an honest man to help cool down the situation. I decide to retrace their steps to where the incident happened and quickly find the gold ring stuck in between a crack in the road using my night eyes. The orc doesn't apologize for accusing the dwarf but slowly walks off into the distance. The Dwarf thanks me for helping him and continues on his walk. I feel satisfied knowing I could help and continue on myself.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: As the man begins to fall i catch him and help him up. I ask him if he's alright and he replies, " I'm alright but I will need another walking stick to be able to travel any further." I first pick up his coins then go searching for a sturdy stick in a nearby forest. Soon enough I find a stick worthy enough to last him during his journey. The frail man thanks me and continues on his way. Once again i'm satisfied knowing I could help.

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Reasons:

• A 23 year old Dark Elf is the equivalent of a baby elf. 23 human years in Elven years is probably around 200 elven years old. I suggest you change that.
  
• Also, make your biography one paragraph longer.
  
• Your biography is lacking in server lore. Read up on dark elven lore either on the forums, or on the wiki. Specify where your character grew up, and things like that.

PM me if you need any help. Remember to click all the voting buttons in my signature!

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