[Denied]Darksouls Application

[darksouls 0]

]Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:mrwitchdoctor

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:(UTC+10:00) Brisbane/Australia

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes I do

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:yes i have played on multiple servers and video games involving roleplay

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes i understand and agree to the rules

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:I was searching for a good roleplay server and lord of the craft came up straight away

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:i have made 2 but they where either out dated or missed information

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? Yes i have posted it My name is mrwitchdoctor

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: creating and narrating a character of your own creation and acting in away that fits with the atmosphere or lore of the area you are in

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:using knowledge of a game to influence your own actions within the game

in a usually unsporting way

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:it is forcing the result of someones actions on another character (power-emoting is heavily frowned on in most roleplay games and servers)

In-Character Details

Character Name:darksouls

Character Race:elf (dark elf)

Biography: A young elf growing up in an elven town he showed great talent in magic but could not yet explore the bounders of his new found talent. On the night of his father’s death his mother went silent she never talked to anyone again it was almost like she blamed the town people for his death when he reached age 16 he went out to explore the world of Aegis when he was returning home he saw four ascended rushing past a fishing village unaware of his presence. Why they had appeared in such a place was unclear perhaps they were returning to their city or going to battle as they passed through the village every one bowed almost praising them their presence must have been astonishing to the people when he got home he told the towns people of his sighting and his other adventures he experienced on his journey. After his returning he got all the books he could find about magic slowly his knowledge grew until he was ready so once more he went out into the world of Aegis but this time it was not for adventures it was for knowledge. He went to Malinore to learn about their history with magic he learned from many other places about the ascended and the undead he also learned of the history of the hidden scrolls after he left Malinore he went to the cloud temple of Aegis Library where he learnt everything he needed to. His goal is to speak with an ascended and learn from a master of knowledge.

appearance:tall dark grey skin blue eyes white hair cloths are black maroon white and grey

-What are your characters ambitions?: he constantly seeks allies and hates being alone because it reminds him of the family he lost

-Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

This is an image of my skin but is not a screen shot i was unable to copy the URL of my screen shot

-Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: No

Open-Response-Questions

-Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

-Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? i ask the dwarf for any item he sells i then give him a larger amount of minas then it is worth as he trys to hand the minas back i tell him "keep it business is hard around here and you work very hard" i walk off and give the dwarf a kind smile

-You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I go up to the orc and tell him "there's an orc recruitment stand down the road that's asking for strong powerful orcs to sign up for a battle" (knowing the orc is egotistic and war hungry he rushes down the road) as the orc runs down the road i ask the dwarf if he is ok he does not answer he only says "thank you elf but your help was not needed" he then walks off up the road i quickly walk up the road aswell knowing the orc has discovered that he has been tricked.

-Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do? I quickly rush down to help the man asking "are you all right that was a bad fall" i then get a piece of cloth gather the coins in it and hand the minas to the old man i offer the man my hiking stick in replace of his broken walking stick i ask the man "do you want me to help you get to Malinore it is not to far away from here" I then escort the old man to an Inn inside Malinore where i pay for his stay.

[Aryon 679]

Denied.

I am sorry to inform you, but you will need to post another applications. The items wrong with this application are stated below:

• You will need to change your Biography, as we are no longer in Aegis. You would need to act as if we are in Asulon.
  
• You are not allowed to include magic in this application, not even the smallest amount. Sorry.
  
• Please, please, please improve your grammar.
  

Please re-apply in 24 hours.

[Aryon 679]

Moved to Denied Forum