[Denied]Abdul_65's Application (Second)

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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:Abdul_65

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Eastern Standard Time(EST)/Canada

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:No, I have never roleplayed

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes I have

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:I was looking for roleplay servers on minestatus

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/79312-abdul-65s-application/

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:Yes I have

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Roleplaying is taking the role of a person/character other than yourself

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Meta-Gaming is when you use information that the character you are roleplaying doesn't know

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Power-emoting is when you abuse the use of emotes by using emotes that the other characters cant prevent, for example, instead of saying "Thorad stabs the enemy" you should say "Thorad thrusts his sword at his opponent" or "Thorad swings his sword at his opponent" another example would be, instead of saying "Thorad shot his opponent with his bow" you should say "Thorad shot an arrow towards the direction of his opponent" in the second example, the opponent can be able to deflect the arrow but he won't be able to block the arrow in the first example because it implies that the arrow has hit the opponent

In-Character Details

Character Name:Thorad Oakwood

Character Race:Forest Dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

When I was young, my mother used to farm while my dad used to mine in huge dark caves. My mother would teach me how to farm while my dad would go every day to the cave and mine as much gold and diamonds as he could, my dad would occasionally take me with him to teach me how to mine and his secret technique he would use to find all the diamonds and gold. One day while I was mining with my father, we stumbled upon a dim man made room, we hastily walked inside the room excited as to what we would find, as we searched the room, we found a chest full of diamonds that would supply us enough money for the rest of our lives. As we admired the beauty of the diamonds, a creeper slowly approached my father and blew him up along with all the diamonds found in the chest, I began crying as my father slowly bled to death, my father managed to utter "Go tell your mother what happened, I won't be able to make it," before he died. I was devastated, I spent hours sitting next to my dad crying. I managed to pull myself together and took his best pickaxe and his compass, then slowly mined my way out of the cave. Just as I was about to reach the surface, my dad's pickaxe broke. I cursed my luck and after hours managed to move the rest of the stone out of my way, I quickly ran home to tell my mother what happened.

My mother spent the rest of the day in her room weeping, the next day, my mother taught me how to farm. Each day, my mother would show me how to farm, and all the different fruits and vegetables and how to grow them, every month, we would go to the market in the city and sell as much crops as we could. As years progressed, I started doing most of the work on the farm and managed to learn all the farming techniques that my mother taught me and used them to become a more efficient farmer than my mother. I am planning to move out and open up my own large farm and go mining every now and then in memory of my father.

What are your characters ambitions?:My character's ambition is to become a good farmer and own a large farm.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:My character is friendly and is a character that would hold grudges, he can also clearly recall all the tragic events of his life. However, he is not good at PVP but is great at farming because he has farmed his entire life. He is 75 years old

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

As I approached the city to buy and sell some goods, I saw a poor fellow dwarf wearing dirty ragged clothing selling some crops outside of town. I watched as hundreds of humans entered the city and gave the dwarf a bad look. I approached the dwarf and asked him "Do you need help," the dwarf looked up at me with a smile and replied "You look like a farmer, are you selling any goods?" I opened up my sack and showed him all the crops I was planning to sell in the town. I tell the dwarf "You can have some of my crops to help your business grow," I give the dwarf half of the crops in my bag and give him a small donation (Minas), then slowly make my way inside the city and sell the rest of my crops.

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

As I was in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, I noticed an argument between a terrible ginormous Orc and a Dwarf, I sneaked into a nearby bush and eavesdropped on the conversation. The Orc threatened "If you don't give me all your money and diamonds, I will kill you!" The Orc proceeded to pull out his Sword against the defenceless dwarf. I got fed up with the Orc and jumped at the Orc and tackled him, I yelled to the dwarf "Go! Call the guards!" The dwarf quickly ran, the Orc became furious and attacked me, the Orc and I battled, as I was defending his hits, one of his strikes hit me and knocked me down, which caused me to bleed. Just as the Orc was about to deliver the finishing blow, a guard came up behind him and stabbed him in the back. The Orc fell with a Thump and passed out while the guard delivered the finishing blow. "You alright there," asked the guard, I thankfully replied "Yes, thank you for saving my life." I was taken to a hospital after that where I got my wounds healed up.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

While walking down the road to Malinor, I noticed an weak old man, just as I was about to ask him for directions, the old man's walking stick breaks and he falls to the ground splitting open a bag of Minas. I run over to the old man and worryingly ask "Are you alright?!" The old man just moans, I examine his body to see if he is injured, thankfully, he wasn't hurt badly. I quickly go to the nearest tree and look for a branch suitable enough for a replacement, after a few minutes of searching, I managed to find a branch that would last the old man the trip home. I then go and collect the Minas and put it into the old man's pocket. I help the old man up and give him the branch. The old man tells me "Thank you lad for helping me and not taking my Minas, you are a fine man." I reply to the old man "The pleasure was all mine, we need to get you home before any bandits show up." We slowly made our way to the old man's home.

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Reasons for Denial:

-You have not included server lore in your biography. Try and add in place names, names of important historical events, etc.

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