[Denied]Himir Tunnelbattler

[Remoz 1]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: Remoz12

How old are you?:14 turning 15 in a month.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Sweden

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: I do..

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:. Yes, I've been doing alot of roleplaying on SAMP, LSRP

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes, I do.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: From LSRP's forums.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: It's acting as you would in real life.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Mixing IN CHARACTER with OUT OF CHARACTER

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Forcing someone upon a action.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Himir Tunnelbattler

CharacterRace: . Cave dwarf

Character biography -Makethis at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Himir Tunnelbattler is a 200 year old Cave Dwarf from the ancient city of Kal'Karik. Himir stands at around 5'1 and has a long dark-brown hair and a long beard usually seen braided. Himir has since as a child been trained with ancient ways of fighting Himir would consider himself a great warrior as he's slightly selfish, that's not all there is Himir is a caring, helfull and strong-witted dwarf.

As a young dwarf Himir was very often brought along his father to his guard duties around the keep, Himirs father Ladorn was working as a guardian of the keep. When Himir was brought along he often liked to stay around the training grounds studying the ways of the other dwarven warriors. At the age of 100 Himir was finally contacted for a job on a Merchants ship as a guard on the upper deck, Himir were at times getting seasick and couldn't work up on the upper deck so almost immediately he was fired.

What are your characters ambitions?: To be a well-known adventuring Dwarf.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph,and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay.These questions should be answered in first person.Be detailed,notshort.

Upon entering the MightyHumanCity of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by.The shopkeeper isnot a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city.Whatis your response? Fella', Is this true? What are ye' selling? * Himir eyes the merchant winking with his left eye* Whatever-.. get me one o' those! * Himir points at the finest apple in the basket* How much for it fella'? *Himir reaches down towards his boots, wrapping his palm around his money pouch tossing the merchant a few coins*

You’re wandering the OrenRoad late at night,when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf.Thereisno help nearby,and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? * Himir rushes to aid, as he sees that the dwarf's getting threatened* Fellas' no need for violence * he says with a calm but exhausted voice * I'm sure we can settle this some other way? * He says showing the Orc his money pouch, nodding * ORC: Ah' little dwarf toss me three silver coins, and I wont slit his throat. * Himir reaches down into his pouch retrieving two coins, quickly tossing them towards the Orc,* ORC: Both of ya' get outta' here, NOW! * The Orc grunts*

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man.His walking stick , looks weak and frail,and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks,and the man falls to the ground.As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground,and splits open.As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man.What does your character do?: * Himir reaches down, collecting the mans Minas, counting them before he stuffs two coins into his waistline. Himir reaches down, assisting the old man up, offering him the rest of the coins.* Old man, I'm sorry but I'm in a hurry * he says as he quickly starts to pace up onward the road*

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Either expand on all three definitions or add examples. You can find more information on the forums and wiki, but make sure to use your own words.

Kal'Karik is a nation of the Dwarves, Karik was the main city. If your character is 200 years old he would have been born in Kal'Urguan, the Dwarven city of Aegis. He could have lived in Karik while in Asulon.

Cannot steal in the third Open Response Question without a Villain Application.

You may want to expand slightly on the first and last ORQs.

A good attempt. Mostly minor things to fix.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[everblue2er101 906]

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