[Denied][Orc] Colts 2Nd Application

[Colt 6]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:Coltello_Gocce

How old are you?:17

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:United States of America

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes I do.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Yes I have played multiple RP servers for Grand Theft Auto but never Minecraft.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes I have.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:Through YouTube.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/63572-coltello-gocces-application/page__p__496053#entry496053

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Roleplaying is when you place your self in a characters mind and act and speak as them.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Metagaming is the act of using information that your character does not know that you've obtained OOC.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Power-Emoting is when some one preforms an action that doesn't allow another character to react to it.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Bagrak

Character Race:Orc

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Bagrak is a 320 year old Orc weighing 370lbs standing at 8'2". Bagrak has a pale green complexion brown eyes, long tusks and a bald head. Bagrak grew up the adopted child of a male Orc blacksmith. The Orc blacksmith wanted a child to carry on his honor. So he adopted Bagrak from a family that could not keep due to the lack of minas they had. Bagrak aged with a passion for War Uzg and loved his home dreaming to be a great warrior. He worked with his father the blacksmith as his profession creating wonderful axes. On Bagraks free time he practiced with the axes he created believing that all true warriors fight with melee. He watches the Krughai leave for war and wishes to become a Brute among the ranks. He feels that creating mighty weapons and armor for the Krughai will get him noticed by them. Bagrak becomes the apprentice of his father at his shop but makes it clear to his father that he wants to become a Brute to defend the nation. He waits for his chance to prove him self a powerful Orc.

What are your characters ambitions?:To bring honor and glory to a mighty clan of War Uzg and defend Krugs name from tarnish.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:http://s1164.beta.photobucket.com/user/Coltello_Gocce/media/2013-01-12_104454_zps40aad715.png.html

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:He doesn't like to be disrespected and will not tolerate theft. He is a proud Orc and will defend his culture.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? Bagrak shows no pity for the Dwarf ignoring his advertisement. He continues through Arethor looking for a human shop-keeper to buy wares from. He stocks up on whetstones, food, and raw smithing materials and leaves for The War Uzg.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? Bagrak walks over to the Orc and Dwarf examining the situation. He withdraws his axe and begins to join the other Orc in threatening the helpless Dwarf. Bagrak warns the Dwarf not to be seen by him again or he'll be his new trophy.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: Bagrak offers his hand to pull the man up to his feet. Then kneels down to place the Minas back into the bag handing it to the man. Bagrak then advises the man to be more careful and continues to walk down the road.

I felt doing the Bagrak: and Dwarf: dialogue would be a form of power-gaming so I didn't feel comfortable doing it like that since I can't speak on behalf of another character.

[nppeck 601]

This application needs a lot more detail and effort put into the biography and ORQ's. Please try and put a least few more sentences into each. Furthermore, please also demonstrate that you can speak the orcish dialect or the blah within your application.

[nppeck 601]

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