[Denied]Krehy Breamsmits App

[Krehy Stormhammer 1]

Out-Of-Character Details

 

 

Minecraft Account Name: eagletalon00
How old are you?: 16
Time-Zone/Country of Residence: -5 GMT, USA
Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: yes
Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: yes
Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: yes
How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: Youtube
Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:
Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraft...nique-gameplay/! :

 

 

 

 

 

 

Definitions

 

 

 

 

 

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: roleplaying to me is puting yourself into the body of another being that you've created youself and emersing yourself in the character and its environment
In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:  metagaming to me is when your character that you are roleplaying as has somehow learned of information or commited actions that would not be possible in the environment and would be not relevant to the character in any way, for example one knowing the plans of his enemy without ever actually being told, or discovering them.
In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: to me power-emoting is when someone does something that would not allow the opposing player to respond in anyway. for example "player 1 kills player 2 and steals all his gold" without player 2 being able to do anything about that action.

 

 

 

 

 

In-Character Details

 

 

 

 

 

Character Name: Krehy breamsmit
Character Race: Mountain dwarf
Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Krehy breamsmits story starts deep in the mountains of kal'urguan during a time of glory and prosper. Born into a culture of mountain dwarves krehy began learning everything he could about the world around him. For 30 long years krehy studied and he learned. He learned of the other races in the world. Of the humans in the kingdom of oren, the elves of malinor and the orcs in their large desert cities. Krehy learned the skills of combat and how to wield an axe in  battle and grew quickly into a fine youngling aspiring for glory in battle. Not only did he learn the ways of combat but he was also taught of the basics of retrieving ores of the deep bastions of the earth and the language of his people.

            Growing up krehy has been compared to his father krandal. Like his father krehy has much ambition that sometimes has gotten him in trouble. His ability to wield an axe has made krehys ambition now 102 years of age he has come to dream of become a warrior. Hearing of the victories of the mighty dwarven legion krehy dreams of that life. Always wanting to prove himself krehy is fearless in the face of battle. Off the field people see another side of krehy though. He is a humble person that is quite in nature when not faced with the speakings of warfare krehy prefers to draw pictures of mighty structures in the books he reads and thinks if he wasn't a warrior he'd like to construct mighty displays of art out of the mountains underbelly.

What are your characters ambitions?: to become a part of the dwarven legion and be spoken of in great battles and stories. If that life does not come he wishes to construct mighty structures out of stone and metal. He does not wish to become a noble or clan leader as he has no interest in the political game
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Open-Response-Questions

 

 

 

 

 

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

 

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

Krehy: Why hello good sir I would like to buy some arms and armor. do you happen to know where I can find the solution to my inquiry?
shopkeeper: Ah why yes Just around the corner and down plum road there is a smithy there you can find fine crafts to your liking.
Krehy: you have my thanks, you look quite down on life have some coin for your advice *tosses 2 coins to the shop keeper as Krehy turns and walks away*
shopkeeper: bless you sir bless you!



You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

* krehy spots the orc and the dwarf, seeing one of his kin being bullied krehy rushes in* Hey you big green ape what are you doing to my kinsman!

orc: I waz just lookinz for a klomp small one don't interuptts me again! *contiunues to bully the dwarf*

krehy: you want a fight eh? Well have one! *punches orc in the side* "ooff what did you do!" the orc says

krehy: theres more from where that came from if you stay *drawes newly acquired axe*

orc: *eyes widen* ok ok I will leaves the little ones alone now just don't point that thing at me! *turns and bounds away*

krehy: *sighs in relief* we're lucky that orc wasn't like the rest of his kind, we might've had a fight on our hands

other dwarf: you have my thanks whats your name, mine is rorian blackstone

krehy: Names Krehy Breamsmit

* the dwarfs become friendly and speak for awhile*


Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

*man falls to the ground* Oof that hurt!

krehy: Oh my gosh let me help you up *helping the man you krehy spots a strong looking stick nearby and gives it to the man*
here you go, this won't break so easily. *peering at the coin on the ground krehy picks it up and hands it to the old man*

old man: no no keep it i'm lucky enough you were here I might've not gotten up.

krehy: no no I couldn't I have enough coin already, I was just payed for some help I gave to a fellow dwarf who was in some trouble with an orc I don't need an old mans money.

old man: ok then if you insist.

*krehy hands the money to the man* you be off on your way now don't fall anymore!

old man: thank you I will be sure not to, *hobbles away*

[Queen of Aegis 174]

- Biography is too short

- All ORQ's are too short

- I must say though that this is a great start for a first try, what I also liked is that you used something from the 2nd ORQ in the 3rd one

 

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[Queen of Aegis 174]

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