[Denied]Delta's Application #1

[Delta 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: Deltatheawesome

How old are you?: 12

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: U.S.A Mountain time

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes, some

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: My brother found it

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: N/A

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

 

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is where you have a character and you must play like your character, like use his personalities and stuff while playing as your character.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta-gaming is an out of character action that a player does with real life knowledge.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power-emoting is abuse to other players by talking example: "Gnash hits Bob then cuts his limbs off."

 

In-Character Details

Character Name: Gnash

Character Race: Orc Goblin

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

 

Gnash, was born in a small orc village. He was weaker than the other Orcs, due to him being a Goblin. He was one of the only Goblins in the village. Gash got adopted because his real parents died in a war the day Gnash was born. Gnash always tried to do mechanics like he heard his dad had done. But everytime he tried, he failed.

 

What Gash usually likes to do is read books. He's nearly read all of the books his adopted parents own. Whether it's fiction or non-fiction. As he got older, the only books he read were about mechanics. He tried to learn every single detail on them, which was very hard. After he read most of the books on mechanics it was still failure, after failure. Once he got sick of trying everything to perfect his mechanics, he ran away from his adopted parents and tried to find a mechanics teacher. 

 

What are your characters ambitions?: He wants to find a mechanics teacher and figure out if his real parents are really dead.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: In attachments

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: Nothing else I can think of.

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

 

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? I would help him and give him some money. Then I would get a job and most money I get I would give to him. Also, I will try to advertise his shop. Once he has a good amount of money, he can have a good life.

 

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? If an orc was threatening a dwarf I would try to stop the orc. I would tell the dwarf to run then I would try to get the orc to stop. If he didn't stop I would fight the orc. If the orc was too strong, I would run.

 

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: I would find another stick and put the coins back in the bag. But, I might just take one. I would also help him walk to his destination, then I would get back to my quest. I would help any senior citizen.

[Queen of Aegis 174]

- You did not post on the minecraft forum

- power-emoting definition is wrong

- Killed parents is overused

- your biography is too short

- All ORQ's are too short and lack dialog

 

 

You may reapply 24 hours after this post

 

If you have any questions feel free to PM me

 

~BoomBox~

[Queen of Aegis 174]

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