[Denied][Human] Acras Sombre

[Deremotive 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: Deremotive
How old are you?: 17
Time-Zone: Check my account on the website
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:
SoTa MC server, Mutiple games of SC2 Cortex RP, SA MC rp Server, forum Rp’s.
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: From friends who are already playing, Evilbanana and Gamer9726
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):
Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: YES

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: The action of playing another character that is not who you are
Meta-gaming: Using knowledge out of game to influence in game events, IE a post is made about a upcoming event that is going to to be a surprise and then have your character know about it
Power-emoting: To take away the power of another player such as, *Deremotive punches bill in the stomach which causes bill to die of a heartattack*, without asking them

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Acras Sombre
Current Age: 29
Sub-race (if any): Northerner
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): Born to a upper family of Alchemists, His early life was fairly good, never being forced to skip a meal. He family brought him up in the ways of being a alchemist just like his father, and his father before him, but something was always different about the boy. Like the rest of his family, he excelled in alchemy but never truly felt the pull of learning all that there was to know by learning of magic and elements. possibly inspired by the wandering alchemist story, he preferred the open lands of the world, adventuring where ever he could in the capital city of Holy Oren Empire. Finally he left his home for lands outward when he was old enough, and became a wanderer, taking up jobs where ever he could, whether it be as a part time merchant or a Sword for hire.
Ambitions for the Future: To explore all reaches of the world. He also is willing to help anyone he considers a friend, and will do almost anything to help them.
Personality: He is very bold and brave, but is surprisingly secret about his life, often keeping it mostly to him self and those he calls allies and even then they may never know all of his wild adventures. He is also one not to be told no, often jumping restriction fences like they were nothing, although he knows when to give in. He also has a dislike of those he considers rule setters, those who put rules in place to keep people from doing things. He is also rather odd in the fact that he often tries to steer away from the main group to “Fully understand” what the others see, unless it is absolutely necessary for his survival.
Skills: He is a capable swordsman and a good alchemist, able of brewing potions of very good quality when provided with the right ingredients. He is also a mild cook since he has often had to cook his provisions.
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):

Any other details you wish to share about your character:

Open-Response-Questions
Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.
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1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?

Answer: Acras slowly begins to follow him, and readies a nausea potion in one head and puts his other on his sword. The man stops and looks ahead, then ducks into a ally, realizing he was being followed. He curses under his breath and reports to a guard about the man and continues on his way


2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armor and an iron longsword, how do you react?

Answer: Acras rushes in and slashes the blade across the back of the first bandit, Sending him to the ground, then the other bandit turned around and lunged his sword at Acras who narrowly is able to deflect it. This bandit was much capable swordsman then him and he was reduced to only being able to deflect the blows. Soon Acras is beginning to tire and is about to give in, when the bandit screams out in pain. The old man had been able to finish off the first bandit and was able to stab the other one in the back while he was distracted. Acras quickly finishes the bandit off in a last surge before kneeling down, tired. The old man helps him inside and the next day, the man gives him some money and some food for his troubles.


3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).

Answer: Acras begins quickly begins to try and buy as much alchemical supplies as he could. He first buys the ghast tears, blaze rods and nether wart. They were arguably the most important and rare, and he is able to get them for a fair price. He then begins to buy the lesser goods, such as carrots, golden nuggets, and the such. He then walks off, carrying the goods he got a for a decent price.

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Please add examples to ALL of your definitions so we can make sure you understand completely what each definition means.

 

 

Your Biography was good however try to make sure you are using a bit more server lore, this will make your application a lot better and will also give you a quick learning adventure about Lord Of The Craft. Also go into detail about your character and maybe talk about a key event in his life or talk about his strengths and weaknesses  The more detail about your characters life the better as it will tell us, The Application Team that you understand your characters role on Lord Of The Craft. Server Lore can be: Language, Place names, Characters, events, etc..

 

You can find a lot of server lore and interesting facts on the Lord of the Craft Wiki and many threads on the Human Role-Play Forums. Here are the links to each.

 

Human Wiki page

Human Role Play Forum

 

If you need any more help on Lore or have any questions feel free to ask a lore master or member of the Application Team. I am sure they will be happy to help.

 

Your Character Questions are too short, please answer these with a paragraph long answer. This will re-assure us that you understand your character well enough to role play with it.

 

Your Open Response Question need to display the role play method in them to achieve an accepted application. You need to set it out like this:

 

Edward looks around the Inn and notices a man tucked away in the corner. The man is wearing dark robes with a hood resting over his head. He walks across the room towards the man before calling over "Oi You! Come over here!" The man looks up towards Edward and gasps before attempting to get up and flee.

 

You should set out your role play that and then we will know that you can control role play with your character and also know if you have the role-playing skills to obtain a place on our server. If you can do this method with every single Open Response Questions they will be at a closer to acceptable applications standard. However do not forget to include details about your character and too make sure you stay as your character throughout the role play. Include his/her(s) strengths or weaknesses to make your role playing effective.

 

Good luck with your next attempt to apply to Lord of the Craft.

 

Thanks. 

 

Ben~

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