[Denied][Orc] Thror Application (3)

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Out-Of-Character

Information

Please

fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the

essential details are accurate.

Minecraft

Account Name: _Young_Thor_

How old are

you?:12

Time-Zone:GMT

Have you

read, understood and agreed to the rules?:yes

What

previous experience have you had in role-playing?: elder scrolls games.

How did you

hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: i was just searching minecraft vids on youtube and came across LotC, ive watched loads now and ever since then ive wanted to be in the server.

Link any

applications that you have previously made for the server: n/a

Have you

posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link

above): yes

Have you

read the Orcish lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in

your biography?: yes i will, proudly.

Definitions

In your

own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from

elsewhere!:

Role-playing: taking on the role of someone suited to the environment you are playing in.

Meta-gaming: e.g- you see someone's name tag underground, but if this were real there would be no name tag and you wouldn't know they we're there.

Power-emoting: using words in game to cancell out someones words e.g Archie siftly grabs an arrow and fires it from his bow killing Urolk, therefore meaning Urolk cannot say anything back.

In-Character

Information:

Complete

the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Ugrok-Iron Fist

Current Age:18

Past / History

(include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

My mother raised me as a lone parent at the city of Stritzgoi, she often would tell me of how my father died gloriously fighting against the dwarves, how he took an arrow to the knee, making him collapse and then having a sword plunge through his body right through his heart, he didn't die from that though, it was whilst trying to get back up and fight, he walked a meter, and then... he collapsed again, dead.

This all happened when I was young, about the age o' 4. Once I reached six, my mother sent me to an Orcish warlord to master every Orcish fighting skill, I stayed there 'till I was ten, then I went off and came back to Stritzgoi, but when I got there, a gang of Orcs were stood in my way and they wouldn't let me pass them unless I beat their leader at head butting, luckily for me, I had already mastered this skill and beat him, they let me pass.

I went to my house and a friend of my mother was outside weeping, I asked "what's wrong?" She replied "y'your mother passed away earlier this morning, she was ripped open by another Uruk, who was accompanied by a Shaman."

I started to ask where the Uruk had gone, and she said "jus' outside the city." I went out and challenged the Uruk to one on one combat, eventually after a long and bloody conflict, I won! Killing the other Uruk and taking his head as a prize to hang on my wall in the process.

Then once I was 14 I ran off and joined a group of bandit Uruks and enjoyed myself pillaging and marauding the dwarves and men alike, ahh! Those were the good ol' dayz! Then whilst I was the age of sixteen, the group disbanded, leaving me no choice but to settle down somewhere, so I went to settle down in the human city of Solace.

Then I came back to Stritzgoi, meeting various nomadic Orcs along the way, when I got back I went to the local smithy to buy a flattener, I then joined the war uzg of Asulon, and enjoyed two years with SpineSmasher (my Flattener) killing various people.

I then left at the age of 18, here I am...

Ambitions for

the Future: to bring honour and prowess to my family though bloody combat.

Personality: doesn't like anyone who gets in my way, friendly to other orcs of a strong build, intimidating. Has a short temper, brave, courages and friendly to people who are friendly to him.

Skills: good swordsman and axe wielder.

Appearance (this

must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): https://www.dropbox.com/s/hj7pj1ateigxjke/2013-03-03%2011.07.19.jpg

Any other

details you wish to share about your character: the skull on his belt is that of a dwarf that he killed whilst in the War Uzg of Asulon.

Open-Response-Questions

Each

question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which

must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not

break character or lore at any point.

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1. You

are roaming the mighty capital of the War Nation Of Uruks, as you near the Arena

you spot an Orc, wearing what seems to be human garbs as he looks at you he

smiles and say out loud in common not in blah “Come friend let me teach you of

civilization and break your mind from this orcish savagery!”, how do you react?

Answer:

Him: come friend let me teach you of civilisation and break your mind from this Orcish savagery!

Me: True Orcs fight for a living!

Him: Well we shouldn't as it means war and we can't always be at war coz we might lose!

Me: But we don't lose coz we're brave and fight for our nation!

Him: Whatever you say grumps...

Me: I'd suggest gettin outta here before I rip your chest open and feast on your insides!

Him: I'll be headed of then! *he hurries off really panicky*

2. As you

are watching an Arena fight between two Orcs, the Goj of Krug walks towards the

Arena, and shouts “Mi brudderz da Feztivel ob Krug iz coummeh! We needz

zacrifizez tu zummun da Zpirit ob Krug un diz uzg, go gadder da Warbandz nd

raid da landz nd bring mi buck zacrifizez, twiggy nd pinky dat we kan zlauhater

upun da alter ob Krug nuw go mi Brudderz!” How do you react to this?

Answer: *I run to the meeting place, I gather the Uruk war bands a couple Goblins, and a Shaman and I shout " prepare to plunder, slaughter and maraud the lands of men!, bring me back 50 sacrifices to sacrifice in the name of Krug!" *as the war bands hurry off to get the sacrifices for me to sacrifice to the Krug*.

*they return*

Me: good! You've brought me back loads more sacrifices than I asked for, how many?

Captain: 87 sir!

Me: good, a mixture of livestock, humans, dwarves and halflings!

3. As you

are travelling in the barren Orcish deserts you come across a quiet oasis. Beside

it sits a small tent where a young orc is preparing a meal of roasted halfling.

He calls you over, offering you to join in with his meal. What does your

character do?

Answer:

me: nay young warrior, i catch and kill my own food, but how's about we have a bash up!

Him: Ok!*lowering his head ready to headbutt*

Me: *charging and leaving a gash on his face then turning round ready to charge again*

*after a long and bloody battle he withdraws*

Me: Actually I'll take an arm of the halfling after that!

Him: Here ya go!

Me: thanks fer the fight and some yummy halfling, ill be headin on to get me own 'alfling now!

Him: ok, butt ya later.

[Peter Chivay 2494]

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

 

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

 

1. Orcs speak in blah, not regular tongue. Please read up on the blah and use that as your language when speaking.

 

2. Please write your ORQs more fluid and story like, it is much easier to showcase RP ability.

 

3. Remember that this is a serious roleplay server, much different from Elder Scrolls or any other RPG game.

 

Feel free to PM me if you have any concerns.

[Peter Chivay 2494]

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