[Denied][Human] Pinkydude500

[pinkydude500 1]

[nobody 146]

You may reapply in 24 hours time. If you apply before this time you will be denied instantly.

 

Reasons for Denial:

Firstly, although not a reason for denial, is the colour of the writing. The contrast against the black makes it quite hard to read, and hurts the eyes a little.

 

You are lacking a roleplay definition and your meta-gaming and power-emoting definitions need examples and need to be a little more detailed.

 

Your biography has no Human lore whatsoever. If you want to have a chance of being accepted, you must include a good amount of lore in your biography and base your character on events in the lore for your race. You can search up some more in the Human Roleplay section and in the Human Wiki page.

 

Your character seems to have no defects at all and in your biography, you seem to be agile enough to put a bow away and stab a wolf, in the speed it takes a wolf to pounce, which I would think would take many, many years of training.

 

Your ORQs (Open Response Questions) are far too vague. They are there to show off your roleplaying skill, and how you would provide expansive roleplay in certain situations. You must expand your answers in each of the questions.

 

If you have any more questions involving the lore or your denial, do not hesitate in PMing me.

[nobody 146]

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