[Denied]Dwarf Mrcool111

[TheLonleyMulch 1]

Minecraft Account Name: MrCool111
How old are you?: 12
Time-Zone: North American Eastern (American Central)
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Role-playing console games such as Skyrim
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: Scrolling through PMC's role-playing servers
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): No
Have you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: a change in character to conduct a role. Usually for a medieval time character
Meta-gaming: personal gain from out of character knowledge and action
Power-emoting: abusive and over powered chat actions and emotes

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Yulri Agevor
Current Age: 13 sessoins
Sub-race (if any): Cave Dwarf
Clan (if any):
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):[/b]

Yulri Agevor was born in Kal'Urguan in the mines of Kalos. His mother was a black smith and his father was a miner. He started mining at the early session 2. He knows enough about smithing to forge his own weapons and armor. He moved to Kal'Karik at the session of 4 and has been mining and smithing ever since to make a living.

He lives a lonley life consisting of mining, smithing, and drinking. All of his friends have gone to war. And he spends most of his nights in the local tavern, drinking his problems away. He married Vesriseld Iss'tas, but she died in a cave-in. He never married again. Ever since then he has been longing to join a guild but never has gotten the courage to do so.
Ambitions for the Future: To make enough money to move back to Kal'Urguan to visit his dieing father. Once there, he plans to join a guild and forge weapons and armor for there army.
Personality: a lonley and rude dwarf with an attraction towards Blaze's Brandy
Skills: Mining and Smithing
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. Whilst mining deep in the undergrounds of Kalos you see a large deposit of diamond ore at the other side of the ravine you are on. There is a very thin rock bridge that looks precariously unstable, but it is the only way to access the deposit. What do you do?[/b]

Answer: Despite the unstable rock bridge, I'd run across and mine the large diamond deposit. Upon arriving at my home; I would store the gems away or make use of them. I might even decorate my braided beard with them.

[b]2. You are sitting in the local tavern with a large pint of ale in your hand - sitting nearby you is a rather young dwarf whom is clearly going through a bad time. He is crying to himself, and clutching a small wooden hammer toy. In the other corner of the room two shady dwarves are sitting whispering to each other and pointing occasionally at the dwarf. They stand up, one with a small dagger in his hand and begin to approach the young dwarf. What do you do?[/b]

Answer: It depends, if the shady dwarves were planning to give the dagger to the young dwarf, then I'd mind my own buisness. If the were planning to kill the young dwarf, I'd stand up, fists raised, and curse at them while motioning towards the young dwarf to get out the tavern. Due to the uncertainty of the matter, I'd fight them any way.

[b]3. Whilst wandering through the Dwarven Caverns you hear a voice call out to you; “Oi, ye’! C’mere n’ get ye’rself an ale!”. You spin on your heel and see a heavily bearded bar-owner looking at you - a huge grin on his face, and a mug of ale in his hand. How do you react?[/b]

Answer: I'd take the lagger straight out of his hand and gulp it down becuase hey, free ale. If he were to fight me, I'd defend my self, assuring the survival of my life and the life of my ale. If not, we would best friends and he would supply me with all the ale he could make

[everblue2er101 906]

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Need to post on the Minecraft Forums before you can be accepted.

Expand on all three definitions or add examples.

Kal'Urguan was a city of Aegis, not Kalos. Please expand slightly on the bio, it feels underdeveloped.

Expand on all Open Response Questions and add dialogue to the last two.


Good first attempt, needs more detail.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. Send me a PM if you have any questions.

[everblue2er101 906]

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