[Denied]Nooblord5000's Application

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[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: nooblord5000
How old are you?: 15
Time-Zone: GMT +1
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: I read them and I agree
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Not in minecraft, but i have done some stage plays of medival times.
How
did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: Who hasn't its famous
and I finaly got a premium account and am able to join it.
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): no
Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: yes

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing:
living thru a fictional character with a unique lore and a purpose in
life that cannot be usually made true in real world.
Meta-gaming: Sharing out personal info in-game which can be used aginst you or other players.
Power-emoting: over use of emotes.

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Jonathan Drake
Current Age: 19
Sub-race (if any):
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):
Jonathan or john for short was a simple man, living a simple life stuff
as wars and politics were of no interest to him. he lived out in the
woods with his ill father who was slowly passing away. But he had one
wish, to see the world, he would always be happy when explorers came by
his house and stop for some home made ale john and his father were
making. Thus the father died and shortly after, John decided to go see
the world, he did not want to die as his old man, who never saw anything
past the forest. And so he ventured wishing that he could life the
adventures of the heroes he heard off, and meet new friends. But John
was of brave and fair heart, as he was taught by his father, when he
would hear a man in danger, he wouldnt hessitate to go and help him.
Ambitions for the Future:[/b] Seeing every corner of the world, meeting lots of friends, have fun on his journey, help all that are in need of assistance
Personality:[/b]  Cheerful,brave, full of energy, quite smart
Skills:[/b] He excels fighting with sword and axe since he needed these skills to survive in the woods.
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):[/b] So apperantly attaching files is not allowed? Thats what it said. So heres a link to MNCS of my skin I made. http://www.minershoes.com/skin/view/i515642fb9cb911971770266869619199120
Any other details you wish to share about your character:[/b]Is not comfortable inside big cities.

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?[/b]

Answer:
I would shout for the guards for help and while they would be on the
way I would aproach the figure myself, to see for myself what is going
on. If i were correct and that person truly is to no good I would
assault him.


[b]2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?[/b]

Answer:
I would approach slowly, giving a sign to the old man to stay quite.
When i would be within arms reach I would smack one of the bandits on
the head and attack the other one.


[b]3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).[/b]
My first thought would be to get some food for my journey, when i would
approach the old man I would quickly scan what he is selling. I would
only take what I need and try to bargain the lowest price possible,
since the life of the traveler is not a path scatered with gold. But I
would leave him a tip if he was nice since its so rare to find kind
people in this world.

[Lita 677]

• You are required to post on the MC forums. 
• Grammar and spelling need a lot of work. 
• Definitions need effort, they're vague and powergaming is incorrect. Examples are welcome.
• Your biography seems to have no logical progression, somehow your father died because travelers bought ale? 
• The Open Response Questions (ORQs) are intended to be written as a story, not as possibilities. Use more dialogue, and do it as if you were writing a story for school or something similar. 
• Try to fix the BBCode, so that the answers are colored differently from the questions. Each opening tag (one of the [ ] brackets without a / in it) needs a closing tag where it ends (the brackets with the / in them).

Remember to wait 24 hours before reapplying, and feel free to PM me with any questions.

[Lita 677]

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