[Denied]Dwarf Mrcool111

[TheLonleyMulch 1]

Minecraft Account Name: MrCool111

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone: North American Eastern (American Central)

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Role-playing console games such as Skyrim

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: Scrolling through PMC's role-playing servers

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:
http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/85100-dwarf-mrcool111/

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Yes

Have you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: a change in character to conduct a role. Usually for a medieval time character

Meta-gaming: Out of character information and knowledge. Example: Editing your character's behavior based on real life relationships.

Power-emoting: abusive and overpowered chat actions and emotes

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Yulri Agevor

Current Age: 13 seasons

Sub-race (if any): Cave Dwarf

Clan (if any): The Miner Clan of Quarantai

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

 

Yulri Rcog Agevor was born in Kal’Karik by the mother of Yeri Vesriseld
Agevor and the father of Irmos Rcog Agevor into the Miner Clan of
Quarantai. His mother worked as a barkeeper at the local tavern and his
father worked as the clan’s blacksmith; forging armor, weapons, and
tools for the miners and militiamen. Yulri lived a life of wooden toy
hammers and charcoal covered cookies until the season of two, were all
dwarves were required to mine for one season for the Miner Clan of
Quarantia. Yulri joined the expedition without hesitation, being a clan
tradition, he wasn’t going to let it down. He then mined for the one
season, bringing a small gem fortune to his family. And once the season
was over, he became a fulltime miner instead of joining the clan’s
militia.

Yulri would then mine for a good deal of his lifetime. He would mine by day,
taking every shift he could work, and forge by night, becoming his
father’s apprentice in his blacksmith job. And once work became too
much, he would turn to the local tavern where he would drink his cuts
and bruises away with a fine Blaze’s Brandy. But the more he worked, the
more he wound up at the tavern. Lucky for him, that same tavern would
be the place where he met his wife, Eileen Ang’dyny Agevor. She was the
most beautiful and respected dwarf in the clan, all men respected her,
even those who don’t respect respected her! She had gorgeous amber eyes
with red braided hair that was decorated with the most ravishing gems.
It was love at first sight, for him at least. It took awhile to convince
her to marry him. He brought her Red Roses and Blonde Blossoms everyday
after his mining shifts, he even learned to play the lute for her,
singing the most romantic songs to her at the tavern. And when he was in
his fifth season, she finally said yes. But she later died in a cave
into their sixth season together.

 

He now spends most of his nights at the local tavern, drinking his sorrows away. He quit his job as miner and took the head blacksmith job when his dad died of Ki’katta. He now lives a lonely life of smithing for the clan and late and frequent tavern visits.

 

Ambitions for the Future: To quit the clan and move to Karik to be a blacksmith for their army.

 

Personality: a lonely and rude dwarf with an attraction towards Blaze's Brandy

 

Skills: Mining and Smithing

 

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one
paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as
descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any
point.

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1.
Whilst mining deep in the undergrounds of Kalos you see a large deposit
of diamond ore at the other side of the ravine you are on. There is a
very thin rock bridge that looks precariously unstable, but it is the
only way to access the deposit. What do you do?

Answer:
Despite the unstable rock bridge, I'd run across and mine the large
diamond deposit. Upon arriving at my home; I would store the gems away
or make use of them. I would probably forge a nice diamond sword or a
strong, mighty diamond helm, I might even decorate my braided beard with
them.

2.
You are sitting in the local tavern with a large pint of ale in your
hand - sitting nearby you is a rather young dwarf whom is clearly going
through a bad time. He is crying to himself, and clutching a small
wooden hammer toy. In the other corner of the room two shady dwarves are
sitting whispering to each other and pointing occasionally at the
dwarf. They stand up, one with a small dagger in his hand and begin to
approach the young dwarf. What do you do?

Answer:
It depends, if the shady dwarves were planning to give the dagger to
the young dwarf, then I'd mind my own business. If the were planning to
kill the young dwarf, I'd stand up, fists raised, and curse at them
while motioning towards the young dwarf to get out the tavern. Due to
the uncertainty of the matter, I'd fight them anyway. I’d also yell out curses like “Ye craftless two-faced rust bucket, get o’er here an’ fight like a real dwarf!” and “Ye ladies ar’ so deid.”

 

3.
Whilst wandering through the Dwarven Caverns you hear a voice call out
to you; “Oi, ye’! C’mere n’ get ye’rself an ale!”. You spin on your heel
and see a heavily bearded bar-owner looking at you - a huge grin on his
face, and a mug of ale in his hand. How do you react?

Answer: I’d first yell

“Oy! Get oot! Ye get nae right bein’ here! Ye’ll get yer’self killed!” and after a long silence I would then calmly say:

“Noo gie me that ale an’ get yer’self oot ‘o here. Ah doan’t want tae make
ya’.” He would then proceed with the giving of the ale, I’d then gulp it
down and continue my wandering of the Dwarven Caverns like nothing
happened.

 

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Please wait 24 hours before re-applying or face instant Denial

 

Please add examples to all of your definitions so we can make sure you understand completely what each definition means.

 

Your Biography was good however try to make sure you are using server lore, this will make your application a lot better and will also give you a quick learning adventure about Lord Of The Craft. Also go into detail about your character and maybe talk about a key event in his life or talk about his strengths and weaknesses  The more detail about your characters life the better as it will tell us, The Application Team that you understand your characters role on Lord Of The Craft. Server Lore can be: Language, Place names, Characters, events, etc..

 

You can find a lot of server lore and interesting facts on the Lord of the Craft Wiki and many threads on the Dwarven Role-Play Forums. Here are the links to each.

Dwarven Wiki page

Dwarven Role Play Forum

 

If you need any more help on Lore or have any questions feel free to ask a lore master or member of the Application Team. I am sure they will be happy to help.

 

Please try to stick with in-game Dwarven clans.that excist in Lord of the Craft.

 

Your Character Questions are too short, please answer these with a paragraph long answer. This will re-assure us that you understand your character well enough to role play with it.

 

Please read over and expand on your Open-Response-Questions so they are more fluent and in-depth answers. 

 

Good luck with your next application to Lord of the Craft

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