[Denied][Elf], *elf*'s Application

[*Elf* 0]

[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.



Minecraft Account Name: tpatch

 

How old are you?: 11

Time-Zone: EST

 

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Online role-play and daily backyard role-play and battle games with 3 very close neighbors.

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: The Internet

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Yes

Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes



Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:



Role-playing: Taking on a certain role in detail that is a certain part of a game or a life.

Meta-gaming: Taking information from out-of-game resources and using the information to aid you in the game.

Power-emoting: Doing or saying something that does not give the person involved a chance to respond or react.



In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:



Full Name: Leyu Hileia (Graceful,Beautiful Peace)

Current Age: 210

Sub-race (if any): Wood Elf

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): I have grown up my entire childhood living in a small shack on a little stone path off of the road connecting the Holy Princedom of Malinor and The Cloud Temple. It was joyful there, with the tall, laughing trees and the happy elven travelers, but I was not satisfied with only Elves and trees to interest me. I soon unveiled the promise of the world, with human children and Dwarven weapons. I learned of the Curse of Iblees, The Fallen One, and of the Dwarves greed for riches, and the danger of battle-hungry Orcs, and of the other sub-races of Elves, and also the Human's sadly short lives. After my travels, I returned to the beautiful Holy Princedom of Malinor and told the Elves of my travels. 

      I now wander the streets of the world, looking for a home and a job, hoping to find more stories, myths, and legends, and maybe a warm hearth and a welcoming family once in a while.

        

Ambitions for the Future: Make a good imprint on all of the world, be a part of a community, live life to the benefit of others, make a good, kind, loving, and inspiring memory of myself.

Personality: Kind, Special, Different, Friendly, Fortunate, Curious, Smart, Clumsy

Skills: Hand-to-Hand combat, friend-making, story telling

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): it is an attachment

Any other details you wish to share about your character: The headband she wears was custom made for her by a dwarven crafter apprentice in exchange for some stories.



[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]

[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]

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[b]1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of older elves are mocking a small elven child. How do you react?[/b]



Answer: I sprint over to the group, pushing through until I reach the child.

Leyu: "Stop it! Stop! Have you never been educated?! The first teaching of Malin, protect the young!"

I reach over and touch the small child on the shoulder.

Leyu: "Run home now, you get some rest" I say with a smile.

The weeping child gets up and looks at me, saying a silent thank you.

Leyu: Go now, you have been brave.

The child gives me a smile and runs to the right of the glen of dark trees, in the direction of which a quiet, small shack sits.

Leyu: (to the older Elves) "If you had no pointy ears, I would have mistaken you for Human children with no education in the Elven culture." Go now, back to where you came from."

I walk away, and continue from where I was when I heard the foul snickering.

 

[b]2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?[/b]



Answer: I walk quickly to the old man, ignoring the Minas, and help him up.

Leyu: "Are you ok?" I ask, finally returning the fallen coins.

Old Man: Yes, Yes, thank you young lady.

I quickly look around for a new walking stick, and remember the forest around me. I get up, accidently letting the old man fall to the ground.

Leyu, blushing and worried: " I am so sorry!, I will be right back with a new cane." 

I walk not far into the trees, and quickly find a sturdy piece of oak wood, with a even end for a handle.

Leyu: "How would this do?" I say, emerging from the forest around the clearing.

Old Man: "Perfectly fine, thank you," He says, using the new cane to get up. "I'll be on my way now."

Leyu: May the cane serve you well, sir."

We part ways, both grateful for the unexpected company.

 

[b]3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).



Answer: 

Leyu: "So you have everything?" 

Trader: "Yep, just about!"

Leyu: "A small rose is what I am looking for today."

The trader goes back into the carriage and comes back out with a rose.

Trader: "Will this do?" He says, examining the rose.

Leyu: "Yes, how much?"

Trader: "10 Minas."

The trader chuckles quietly at my reaction.

Leyu: "10!, I will give you 5."

Trader: "10"

I lean on the counter contemplate my choices.

Leyu: "So what you are saying is this flower is worth 10 Minas...."

Trader: "I believe so."

Leyu: "I will give you 5 or nothing sir."

Trader: "No, wait."

Leyu: "2 coins for the beauty, 1 coin for the smell, and 2 coins for your dinner."

Trader: "You are a smart girl, I will give the flower to you for 6."

Leyu: "A compromise...... I'll take it."

I hand the trader 6 coins, and take the paid-for flower off the counter.

Leyu: "Nice doing business with you." I say."

I walk away and continue on my path, happy with my purchase.

[Mystery 118]

Great Application, but Denied,

 

You need to expand on your bio a bit, it is very vague.

 

Please wait 24 hours and post the fixes and you will be in for sure.!

[Mystery 118]

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