[Denied](Ilovemusic) Elvin Application

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Minecraft Account Name: theguy2005

How old are you?: I am 17 years old

 

Time-Zone: Eastern US

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes

 

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I have played WOW and have done a diffrent kind of roleplaying that i cant describe..it is not a PC game it is like roleplaying like this: Douglas walked to his friends house and knocked on the door. it is like that

 

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I was looking for a Minecraft Roleplaying server that has White-list because when i roleplay on one without white-list there is hardly any roleplaying going on!

 

Link any applications that you have previously made for the
server:  I have not made any Applications for this server.

 

Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make
use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes i have!

 

 

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take
any definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing: Roleplaying is the form of taking the role of another person and acting as if you were him/her. When i roleplay i have my charector have a diffrent personallity than me so it is harder

Meta-gaming: using something your character doesn't know to win or come on top in a problem

Power-emoting: Power-emoting is when you emote in an unfair way like this: "Tevor hit John in the face" "John hit Trevor back so hard he flew and hit the wall"

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: John White

Current Age: 30

Sub-race (if any): Wood Elf

Link for skin: http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/1199343/wood-elf/

skin Change due to pending: http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/1199343/wood-elf/

Characters appearance:
Sam is a very jolly fellow with a black and dark green cloak and
leather amour. He has long red hair with a brown buckled sash going over
his left shoulder.

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+

paragraphs long)

 

               When John was born his Father left him and it was just him and his mother. He always loved the outdoors and could never get enough of it. Every night he would sleep in the grass out in his yard. It like was Wonderful and full of joy untill he turned 18. That year His mother died from a heart attack. It was the worst time of Johns life. He lost his father then he lost his mother/ How could it get any worse he would ask himself. he lived on his own for 3 years cooking and gathering food and suplies for himself to live. But One day he fould an older elf wondering around the woods and John got up to see who it could be. He had long darck hair and looked about the age his mother would have been at this time. John told him about his mother an father and how he was all alone and from then on he lived with the man he ment in the woods. He had never got a name from him though.

     

                 When John turned 25 he left the mans home and went to start a new life. But before he could leave The man told John something that left him whth a chocie to leave or stay with him. The man sat down with John and told him that he knew his mother very well because...well because she was his wife. John was shcoked! "so your my father!" he said to him. The man shook his head and John could not belive it. but he still did not want to stay with his father because he had done something that John will never forgive: He left him alone with his mother. So john set out into the forest with the few things he had.

 

                  John traveld to a place called Anthos. It was amazing. John went weast and found large forest. After a while he found a settlment of elves. he smiled and entered in. People were looking at him whispering to eachother and John just kept walking "do you have a leader here?" he asked. From then on he lived in Anthos and found a nice home and lots of friends. He was now 30 and was doing very well with his job and became very welthey. He made lots of friends with little kids and his next mission was to find a wife settle down and have kids. But he would never leav his kids like his father di that was for sure.

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a

minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as
descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the

sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of
older elves are mocking a small elven child. How do you react?

 

Answer: John Listens to the old men and steps up and interups them. "What did you say about this little kid?" John asked and grabed the kid toward him. The old men looked at him and at the boy, "we were just..uh...telling him how wonderful he was." The old men smiled. John looked toward the kid "is this true?" "no!" John looked back at the men. "he is a lier! A Stupid good for nothing Lire!" One of the men said. John looked at the kid "proof! he is not stupid or good for nothing! he is a smart little boy who is growing up! You should know what he feels like considering you were a kid aswell!" John looked at the men and they ran away. After that Johm looked back at the little boy. "Don't ever listen to them ok? You are very smart and can stand up for your self like you just did! They are not nice and you should not be hanging around with them ok?" the boy smiled "ok!" and he walked away. John smiled.

 

2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come

across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you,
falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch
of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the
pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?

Answer: John gose down on his hands and knees and trys to wake up the old man. "are you ok?" he ask hoping for an answer. The old man says nothing. "HELP!" he yells out and people start to run over. "He fell He wont answer please is anyone a doctor?" "I am!" on old man comes next to John and lookes at the man on the ground. "Can you please help him he just fell and  wont get up!" The doctor looked at him then at the mans leg. "He broke his leg," John looked at the leg "Can you fix it?" He asked "of coures! But you will have to pay the price." He looked at the bag of gold coins. "You want me to use his money?" John asked him. "I never said his money." John relized he was had no maney that he could use then he looked at hte stack of gold coins. "I guess i can use his money if it is saving him" John Gives the Doctor his money and the doctor leaves with the old man.

 

 

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Meta-gaming definition could be clarified.

Your character would not come to Anthos on his own, he would have arrived with all the others.

Numerous spelling and grammatical errors to fix.

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