[Denied]Crymsonblade's Second Application

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[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: CrymsonBlade
How old are you?: 20
Time-Zone: Central Standard
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: None
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: Internet
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/89662-crymsonblades-application/#entry788183
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Yes
Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing:one takes on afictional identity for recreational purposes.

Meta-gaming:Using out of character information to infuence the game, which is breaking the  rules
Power-emoting: When you force an action and the other player doesn't have time to react.

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name:  Miruel Sil
Current Age: 18
Sub-race (if any): Dark Elf
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

 

Miruel grew up in a large family and his family filled their house with  fine stone sculptures and the sounds of theater performances, songs and poetry, which were extremely popular pastimes at their house.

Miruel always trusted his father because everyone in the family valued his opinions and choices and his older brother because he was always there for him. They spent a lot of time together.

 

Growing up in Manilor, he was told what profession he would go into from a young age, a warrior. He trained tirelessly in combat and smithing, so he would be ready when his big break came. But no matter how hard he worked his family always wanted him to improve immedietly. As there was no need to rush into a calling prematurely, he contented himself with family life. Unfortunately quiet family life didn't suit him and at the age of 15, he fell in love with a young elf woman in the noble family, but sadly she was already engaged to be married. Even though she was unattainable, Manilor would visit her every chance he got and they would take walks through the woods and discuss the events of that day. Emboldened by not getting caught, Miruel eventually slipped up and her fiancee caught him and imedietely started to call for the guards, but Miruel drew his sword and slew him before the words escaped his lips. 

 

After he realized what he had done, he knew he couldnt stay in Manilor as elven law forbids assault.

He returned home to get supplies. When he arrived, his older brother was the only one there, the others were out doing chores. He could see that Miruel had done something horrible by his face.

He forced Miruel to tell him what  had happend and then decided to go with him to help him.

Miruel was overjoyed at this because both of them were excellent warriors and he thought they would be invincible. 

 

Soon his combat ablities would be tested in a way no one could have imagined. One day, as was his routine, he went out for a walk with his older brother, which was his favorite daily activity becasue he revered his brother.  After a few miles, they chanced upon some orcs fighting a fellow dark elf. He was greatly perplexed as to why the orcs were so far from home. What he didn't know is that weeks earlier, a dark elf explorer had visited the Lur orc clan and being a hotheaded man he had insulted the honor of the clan and had even gone so far as to slay the young son of the chief because he harbored a deep disdain for all orcs. Watching the scene with horror Miruel is usure as to how to procede. His brother,  however, immedietely engages the toughest of the orcs, only to be slain. Mortified, he wants to rush in and avenge his brother, but realizes it would be futile. The orc, having no such reservations, rushes up and clubs him.

 

When he wakes up, he is in an unfamiliar house. Upon asking the human nursing him, he finds out that a farmer found him half-dead by the side of the road and brought him there. After thanking the farmer and taking his leave, he returns to Manilor, but his family is gone. He is still searching for them and for the orc, to avenge his brother. Now 18 he feels responsible for what happened and is determined to rebuild his life.

 

Ambitions for the Future:Find his family, Revenge on the orc, Settle somewhere and rebuild his life.
Personality: Quiet, but fiercely loyal to family and friends
Skills:  Smith, Swordsman, Adequate archer, Adequate farmer, Adequate lumberjack, Adequate miner, Adequate fisherman, some enchanting and potion making experience.
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):
Any other details you wish to share about your character:

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of older elves are mocking a small elven child. How do you react?[/b]

Answer: Miruel: Desist from this fiends!

Older Elves: We will torment whomever we wish for as long as we wish.

Miruel: Do not start a fight you cannot win.

Older Elves: (laughing) Is he crazy, we outnumber him significantly.

Miruel: Please, I implore you, you do not know what you are doing, I am trained to fight, it is all I know, do not force me to harm you. 

(one of them rushes Miruel, only to be knocked out cold. He appeared to be their leader, because they disperse, allowing Miruel to help the child to his/her feet.

Miruel: Are you ok? Do you need any further help?

Child: No, sir. Thank you so much!

Miruel: No need to thank me. Anyone would have done the same. Don't let them push you around in the future.

[b]2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?[/b]

Answer: Miruel: Sir, are you hurt?

Old Man: No, not severely, kind sir thank you.

(Miruel helps the old man to his feet and helps him pick up his coins)

Old Man(offering half of the coins) Here, for you trouble.

Miruel: No, sir, you keep them, it was no trouble at all. 

Old Man: You are most kind.

Miruel: May I escort you to your destination?

Old Man: No no, you've done enough all ready.

Miruel: Oh, but I insist.

Old Man: Very well.

(They walk off together)

[b]3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).

Answer: Miruel: Hail friend, Tis a fine day.

Trader: Yes, a fine day indeed. Care to peruse my wares?

Miruel: Sure.

Miruel: Hmm, I am interested in this iron sword and iron armour, but 300 gold is a bit ridiculous, can you lower the price?

Trader: Sorry, i need all the coin i can get these days. 

Trader: the best i can do is 250 gold.

Miruel: 200 gold and it is a deal.

Trader:(chuckling) I like you, you're a very shrewd young man. It is a deal.

(They exchange is made)

Miruel: Splendid, have a nice day.

Trader: you too.

(Both end up satisfied)

[Lita 677]

1. Your character cannot be good at everything. I suggest you revise your skills, and remove enchanting from this, as this is a magical subtype and you cannot apply with magic.
2. You are intended to explain how you obtained each of your skills in your biography.
3. Your ORQs should be written in a story format, if you don't understand how this works, please refer to previous, implemented applications.

Remember to wait 24 hours after this message is edited before reapplying, and if you have any questions or concerns, please PM me.

Edited June 9, 2013 by {Mentor} Escharian
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