[Denied]Goldenhead123's First Application

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[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: goldenhead123
How old are you?: 13
Time-Zone: GMT +10
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes, I have read, understood and agreed to the rules
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I haven't had any.
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: brotherpig123
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: 
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):
Have you read the Orcish lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: Role-playing  is playing as a fictional character you have created and playing his/her/its life.
Meta-gaming: Using OOC knowledge to give your character an advantage or boost.
Power-emoting: Power-emoting is saying what the other role-player's action is and forcing them to respond to how they may or may not want to. For example, power-emoting is, "Grug smashes Gurg's head off, splattering it everywhere." A correct role-player would say, "Grug swings his mace in a diagonal move at Gurg's head, attempting to kill him."

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Grug Bargol
Current Age:50
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

 

Grug grew up in the midst of the Gahktusk Clan, with his parents, Kadbha Gahktusk, who was a great fighter, and Grug's mother, Urog Gahktusk, who was known as the best blacksmith in the clan. He was given his first Skullsplitta at the age of 8 from his mother, and was taught how to use it from his father. That weapon became what would be a human child's teddy bear to Grug, he played with it day and night up until he was the age of 14, when it became to small to use. Since he was older and stronger then he was 6 years ago, his mother crafted him a new weapon, the Cudgiez, which was a much more devastating weapon than the Skullsplitta. One night, Grug went outside and imagined he was in a battle against the humans. He was swiping his weapon everywhere, but the momentum of one certain swing was to strong to stop and it hit him on the side of head, leaving the scar that's their today.

 

Grug is an extremely  fearful fighter at the age of 25 Grug fought in his first combat situation wich was the battle of Kingston. He dominated on the battle field, after the battle Kadbha Gahktusk thought the time has come for him to pass down the family weapon the DubChoppa and he thought Grug was ready.Grug is an extremely fierce warrior and he shows that in combat but. Grug isn't the smartest orc and he knows he has a massive task in front of him if he wants to become the best warrior in the War Uzg

 

 

Ambitions for the Future: To be the best warrior of the War Uzg

Personality: He is always either hungry, happy, or angry, nothing else. He isn't smart, but fearless. He is also very stubborn.
Skills: Strong, Tough, skilled with a two-handed axe
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): Big, dark-green skin, two large tusks, wears ragged shorts and a cloth around his chest, attached to it a human skull
Any other details you wish to share about your character: His sub-race is an Ogre, and the scars on his face were from him swinging his Cudgiez around too carelessly

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. You are roaming the mighty capital of the War Nation Of Uruks, as you near the Arena you spot an Orc, wearing what seems to be human garbs as he looks at you he smiles and say out loud in common not in blah “Come friend let me teach you of civilization and break your mind from this orcish savagery!”, how do you react?[/b]

Answer:

As Grug is roaming around the mighty capital of the War Nation Of Uruks to the arena he is admiring his new battle axe. As he stumbles upon an orc, that is wearing only human clothes this orc smiles at Grug then says out loud "Come friend let me teach you of civilization and break your mind from this orcish savagery!'' Grug becomes confused, "Mi nub glob!" Grug slowly unsheathes his battle axe "Lat flat" quickly the small orc flees as Grug tries to run him down but the small orc gets away. Grug throws his battle axe on the ground in frustration and yells "SKAH!".

[b]2. As you are watching an Arena fight between two Orcs, the Goj of Krug walks towards the Arena, and shouts “Mi brudderz da Feztivel ob Krug iz coummeh! We needz zacrifizez tu zummun da Zpirit ob Krug un diz uzg, go gadder da Warbandz nd raid da landz nd bring mi buck zacrifizez, twiggy nd pinky dat we kan zlauhater upun da alter ob Krug nuw go mi Brudderz!” How do you react to this?[/b]

Answer:Grug is very entertained as the two orcs were beating each other up at the arena when the Goj of Krug walks towards the stands, and shouts "Mi brudderz da Feztivel ob Krug iz coummeh! We needz zacrifizez tu zummun da Zpirit ob Krug un diz uzg, go gadder da Warbandz nd raid da landz nd bring mi buck zacrifizez, twiggy nd pinky dat we kan zlauhater upun da alter ob Krug nuw go mi Brudderz!" Grug is thrilled by the announcement and doesn't really care about the festival, only being able to kill the elves and other races. "Mi klomp dem twiggiez!" He shouts.

[b]3. As you are travelling in the barren Orcish deserts you come across a quiet oasis. Beside it sits a small tent where a young orc is preparing a meal of roasted halfling. He calls you over, offering you to join in with his meal. What does your character do?[/b]

Answer:As Grug is travelling through a barren Orcish deserts, Grug spots a young orc in a tent next to the oasis. The young orc is calling Grug over, the young orc offered Grug to join in with his meal. Grug is very hungry so he said "Yub" Grug is walking over to join him. "Ug, wub latz nym?" The young orc responds"Mi Durak Rugdush".

[ski_king3 0]

 

Your meta-gaming definition could be a bit more specific. Check here for a really good explanation of meta-gaming.

 

Your bio could do with being a bit longer. Try expanding on it a little, and adding a bit more about his life. Also, was the Battle of Kingston a battle which has actually happened? If not, I would not advise creating it simply for your application.  Also, I would advise from making your character a very strong warrior straight off the bat, as it leaves little room for development.

 

The content of each ORQ was good, I would just like to see them each expanded.

 

If you have any questions, feel free to PM me. You may reapply 24 hours after the time on the post below this one.

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