[Denied]Elf Application, Oreominer

[Oreo 0]

can u please elaborate what u mean by under review

 

[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name:OreoMiner
How old are you?: 16
Time-Zone: GMT
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: on minecraft I've played on BlockEmpires
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I saw a youtube video and started playing as a soul
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: None
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):
Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: yes

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: following a story and playing to the story as a group and u each have a role that you play in this story
Meta-gaming: unknown
Power-emoting: unknown

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Igneonn Siolchirr
Current Age:18
Sub-race (if any): WoodELf
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): He was born travelling, his parents were adventurers. Never staying in the same place, so Igneonn was born when they were travelling and so they settled down for a while, to let igneonn grow up. When he was 4 they started travelling again. They found all new places and landscapes and his father would sell maps that he created whilst on their travels. That was his job, mapping out new areas. Because they were always travelling Igneonn and his parents never claimed a secondname. But when Igneonn was 13 his parents were killed when ambushed by a pack of orcs. Now this wasn't the orcs intention but in the mix of everything they got killed. Igneonn was over come with emotion and shot two of they orcs with his training bow. One of the orcs dropped dead but the other attack Igneonn before getting another arrow through the chest, the orcs swarmed him and beat him then left him for dead. But igneonn survived and took on the name Siolchirr.

 

Igneonn traveled the world alone until he was 15 when he was taken in by a human lady named Sasha. Igneonn could never pronounce her name so took to calling her auntie. Igneonn was very happy with sasha until one day when he was about to turn 16 she weant out to buy some stuff for a party but didnt come back. Later he found out that an undead killed her. On his 16th birthday Igneonn joined the fight against the undead
Ambitions for the Future:drive back to undead and avenge his family and sasha 
Personality:Igneonn is cocky,agile and despite his past a very kind and helpful person but doesnt tend to show his emotion very well.He like to stay alone but often ends up making strong bonds with new peoplw and ends up travelling with and helping them
Skills:tree climbing, archery, strategising, parkour and stealth
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):Igeonn's appearance is very rare among his race, he has bbrown eyes, dark hair and light skin which is extremely rare among wood elves.  
Any other details you wish to share about your character: he is fascinated by the ascended, their powers and their history

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of older elves are mocking a small elven child. How do you react?[/b]

Answer: I would walk over and help the child and i would be confused and mad at the older elves and protect the child until they were gone then i would talk with the child and ask if they were ok then i would go with the child to their village and return them to their parent

 

[b]2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?[/b]

Answer:I would walk over and pick up the mans walking stick and help the man up i would then walk over to the coins gather them up and take a new pouch out of my bag and place the coins in it i would then assist the man back to his village where i would give him the pouch and continue my travels 

[b]3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).

Answer:i would pick out a bow a strong bow made from quality wood i would then ask for a starting price "300" said the man "im not sure can we lower it" i said "how about 260?" he said "im thinking in the 100s" i replied "ill go with 170" he said "ill go with that" i then pay the man, thank him and walk off

Edited July 1, 2013 by Oreo

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Denied!

 

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Please research the answer for each of your definitions. 

 

Your Biography was average. Try to make sure you are using server lore, this will make your application a lot better and will also give you a quick learning adventure about Lord Of The Craft. Also go into detail about your character and maybe talk about a key event in his life or talk about his strengths and weaknesses  The more detail about your characters life the better as it will tell us, The Application Team that you understand your characters role on Lord Of The Craft. Server Lore can be: Language, Place names, Characters, events, etc..

 

Your Character Questions are too short, please answer these with a paragraph long answer. This will re-assure us that you understand your character well enough to role play with it.

 

Your Open Response Question's need to display the role play method in them to achieve an accepted application. You need to set it out like this:

 

Edward looks around the Inn and notices a man tucked away in the corner. The man is wearing dark robes with a hood resting over his head. He walks across the room towards the man before calling over "Oi You! Come over here!" The man looks up towards Edward and gasps before attempting to get up and flee.

 

You should set out your role play like that and then we will know that you can control role play with your character and also know if you have the role-playing skills to obtain a place on our server. Always stay in 3rd person and never change tense or use 1st person in your Open Response Questions. If you can do this method with every single Open Response Questions they will be at a closer to acceptable applications standard. However do not forget to include details about your character and too make sure you stay as your character throughout the role play. Include his/her(s) strengths or weaknesses to make your role playing effective.

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