[Denied]Rexsplinters Application

[rexsplinter 2]

Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - rexsplinter

How old are you?: - 39

What time-zone do you live in?: - english

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - i have played on multiple prison servers

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - some prison servers and skyrim ones

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - no

How did you hear about us?: -you were no.8 in top ten minecraft servers

What do you think the server will be like? - fun and very atomosphereic

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - yes

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - 

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - prenting you are in a world of fantasy and being who you want

What’s metagaming?: - a role-playing-game i think

What’s powergaming?: - creating and having full control over your charcter

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - rexs

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - high elf                                                                                   
What sex are they?: - male

How old are they?: - 18

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - i grew up in a village until i was 14 years of age util the village was attacked by bandits the place burned, everything i ever cared about burnt, now after 4 bitter years of hunting them i finally brought them down but doing so i became a outlaw now i live off the land and save people from fates like my village.

What are they like (personality)?: - sad,angry,bitter and vengefull.

What are their ambitions?: - to rid the world of bandits and monsters alike and then become legal again

Do they have any special skills?: - hunting,shooting,swordplay.paurkour and stealth.

What are their weaknesses?: - death and the lives of others.

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - scarred,bitter and weather hardend.

Anything else you want to say about them?: - no not realy but sorry about the changing fonts dont know what happend lol!

[Aislin 4354]

 

Sadly I'm going to have to deny this. Please wait 24 hours before re-applying. Please make the appropriate changes, listed below.

1. Your definitions for roleplaying, metagaming and powergaming are incorrect. Feel free to google the answers, but write it in your own words.
2. "rexs" isn't really a High Elven name, perhaps search the wiki for some examples.
3. An 18 year-old elf would be considered a toddler. If you wish for your character to be considered a young adult, I would recommend you age him between 50-100 years.
4. Your biography needs a lot more work. Your character is very underdeveloped, you need to explain a lot about him. What does he feel? How does he act in certain situations? Who does he love, who does he hate? Give me every single detail you can about your character. Also, the "bandit attacked my village" backstory is kind of cliche. I'd recommend you change it.
5. I'd like to see more in your personality and ambitions section.
6. You have to many special skills, limit yourself to one, maybe two.
7. You need more serious weaknesses.
8. You need more description in your character's appearance.
9. You need to link a screenshot of your character's skin.

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

[Aislin 4354]

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