Volutional

_________________________________________________________ - Thank you for this application, but there were a couple of small issues that require a little more decoration. - I'd like to see more lore in the biography, being place names, where you were born and what kind of people your parents were. If you knew them. If you'd like some tips on this, you can head over to the Wiki on the main page in order to grab some knowledge on the lore and Places in Asulon. - In your open response questions, I seen some villainous actions, in which you would need to be accepted for this application, and a villain application to be able to perform. This is a vital part of the application as it can come across incorrectly. - In order to improve next time, I highly recommend removing the villainous actions (stabbing the orc without provocation. It is villainous to kill it because your character doesn't like Orcs). You could replace them with your character being helpful, or maybe being insulted by the Orc, which would provoke your character into a conflict. - Thank you for submitting your application, if you have any further queries don't be afraid to Private Message me here on the forums. However I must ask that you do not post another application for 24 hours (from this post). _________________________________________________________

Moved to Denied Forum

_______________________________________________________ - This was a nice application, but there were some inconsistencies that I need to point out. - Your formatting was just a little off - but that is definitely not a major concern. - You cannot perform villainous acts without an accepted villain application - and an accepted whitelist application. I recommend going through your biography and just checking up on those. Including rebellions and such. But a good effort. - In your open response questions, you did perform some villainous acts. You will need to get accepted first, which I know you will next time - You've done well. - If you feel I can adapt on my explaination, I will happily tell you and help you more in private messages :) - Please apply again though, after 24 hours, Good Luck _______________________________________________________

*cracks fingers*

Okay. I can now safely say I nearly died. Thanks for the update. And thanks for stealing my 696969696969 minas...

Moved to Accepted Forum

_________________________________________________________ - Thank you for applying - - Welcome to Asulon, a GM will implement you shortly - _________________________________________________________

Moved to Denied Forum

_________________________________________________________________ - Thank you for applying - - Reasons for denial; - You must have both an accepted Whitelist application and an accepted Villain application in order to perform villainous acts. Your character seems to want to kill things so much that this would require a villain application.- - Your biography seems to be very outdated. Mentioning things like Prophet Rott in which were from a whole year in real time in the past. I suggest revising the lore for modern Asulon before applying again. - Other than that, your application was sound, you seem to know what you are doing. Please apply again in 24 hours, and not before. _________________________________________________________________

Moved to Accepted Forum - Where it will then be used to implement you

_________________________________________________________________ - Thank you for applying - - This was a wonderful application, welcome to Asulon! - Please wait for a GM to implement you, and add you to the whitelist - _________________________________________________________________

Moved to Denied Forum

__________________________________________________________ -Reasons for denial- - Sadly, the general formatting of your application were deemed unreadable, and therefore cannot be reviewed - __________________________________________________________ - Thank you for applying, please try again after 24 hours

Moved to Accepted Forum

Please put Roleplay into posts like this, lest there is no need in posting.

My suggestion from a non-bias, non-dwarf stance? Make something to do. Something like an arena where you'll be encouraged to have fun. Or perhaps start some intricate story work behind the scenes and push it forward. To be fair, half of your time on 3.0 is too much - it has a long time to be finished, you are in no rush unless told otherwise.