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Makayla passes the note and reads it. A slight smirk appears on her face as she mutters to herself "Good, they're getting rid of those...half breeds. Damn Urukan took my sister, so they better get away from here, even if they're half breeds." She then walks away, her hair hanging down her shoulder whilst the wind blows in her face and the smell of the salty sea filling her nose.

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Denied par request.

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Your application has been... Your application has been denied for the following reasons: Whilst your biography is excellent, I wish for you to add some more lore to it. You have only described one city in it, which isn't as much lore as I had liked. You can find some on the forums and/or wiki. Here is a link to the wiki to help you! http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/wikka.php?wakka=HomePage Slight metagaming in your biography. You said you killed the bandit named Ronak, but you had no idea that it would be her inside the tent. It could be someone else. Powergaming in your biography. You murdered everyone inside the camp, on your own. This is severe powergaming, please fix this. Just a personal preference, and you don't need to fix this, but it would make it better to read for me or any other Application Team Member; you don't always make something plural by adding " 's " to something. For example, "bring's" isn't the plural of bring. It means "bring his" or "bring is". Just so you know! Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post or face instant denial. If you have any questions, feel free to pop me a PM!

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Your application has been... You plagiarised your Roleplaying definition and your Power-emoting definition from the Urban Dictionary. You're hereby banned for applying for two months

Under review.

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Your application has been... A decent first application, but I had to deny it for the following reasons: You did not use any lore in your biography. Please include some major events and/or cities in your biography. You can find some lore on the wiki or forums. Here is a link to the wiki to help you! http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/wikka.php?wakka=HomePage Parents being killed by bandits is overused and cliché. If you could change this, it would greatly improve your chances of being accepted. Please add some actions to your Open Response Questions. Only dialogue is not enough. Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post or face instant denial. If you have any questions, feel free to pop me a PM!

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Your application has been... Reason(s): The name you chose, Mali'hiy, isn't really an Elvish name. Yes, it is written in Elven, but Elves wouldn't use "Mali" in their name as it literally translates to Elf. Though, it shows that you've read the lore! Why did your mother die? Please expand on that part of your biography. When Elves are 102. they aren't teens anymore. Please fix this part of your application. Why did your father's skin turn black? It doesn't make any sense. Malin isn't a nation, Malinor is the Elves their nation. Just so you know! Please add some more dialogue to your first Open Response Question. Powergaming in your second Open Response Question. You run towards the man with lightning speed, that is not possible. Various spelling mistakes throughout the whole application, if you can, put the application through Word. There is no need to press enter two times after every sentence. It only makes it harder to read. Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post. If you have any questions, please, don't hesitate to PM me.

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Your application has been... Reason(s): You did not post on the Minecraft Forums. Please include some official server lore in your application. You can find some on the forums and/or wiki. Expand on your first Open Response Question. Include more detail in it. Slight powergaming in your second Open Response Question. Various spelling mistakes throughout the whole application. If you can, put the application through Word or something like that. Please re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions, please, don't hesitate to PM me.

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Your application has been... I'm sorry, but here are the reasons so that you may improve on your application! ------------------------- Please include some official lore in your biography. You can find some on the forums and/or wiki. Slight powergaming in your first Open Response Question. You can't pick up a child so easily and run away without being noticed. Please include some dialogue in your first and second Open Response Question. Also expand on your second Open Response Question. ------------------------- Please re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions, please, don't hesitate to PM me.

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Your application has been... Please use the correct format found here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/80614-official-application-format-application-rules/ Please re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions, please, don't hesitate to PM me.

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