MonkeyCoffee

Your application has been... Hello! After reading through your application, I decided to deny it for the following reasons: Even though you agreed to use the official Orcish lore in your biography, you didn't. Here is a link to the wiki to help you: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/] There is no "Gal" clan. There is no Orcish city called "Galthar". There is no special type of Orc that can breed faster than a different type of Orc. An Orc can not survive on his own when he is just a baby, let alone in the desert. An Orc does not start to get into puberty from 3 days that he was born. Yes, they age faster, they're full grown when they are 20, but that is just too fast. Ghosts do not simply appear and teach you something, so your parents cannot come to you after their death and teach you how to tame beasts, how to lead an army, etc. Orcs do not worship any Gods. The closes you can come to a God is Krug, which isn't really a God, since all Orcs are descendants of Krug. Your first two Open Response Questions contain severe powergaming. In the first one, you give absolutely no chance of the other Orc to fight back. In your second Open Response Question, you simply kill all guards and protectors, which is also powergaming. Also, you need a VA before you can kill or raid. Lastly, I wish for you to expand on all Open Response Questions, add some dialogue and expand on them. Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post or face instant denial. If you have any questions, pop me a PM!

Moved to Denied Forum

Your application has been... Hello, after reading through your application I decided to deny your application for the following reasons: First of all. I wish that you include some more lore in your application. Galahar was way back in Aegis, and we're in Anthos now. Maybe you could include some lore from Asulon, Elysium or Kalos! http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/ That's a link to the wiki, you can probaply find some lore there, or you could PM an Application Team member or Lore Master! Second of all, I wish for you to expand on your first and second Open Response Questions. They're rather short and contain no dialogue. That was all, good luck on your next application! Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post or face instant denial. If you have any questions, pop me a PM!

Can you...change the color? I don't see anything at all unless I highlight it.

Everyone has this problem I believe. You're just gonna have to wait.

Moved to Accepted Forum

Moved to Accepted Forum

Your application has been... Welcome to Anthos! Please wait patiently for a GM to implement you. Happy roleplaying! (P.S. Say hello to Jibuis please ;) )

Moved to Accepted Forum

Your application has been... Excellent application and welcome to Anthos! Please wait patiently for a GM to implement you and happy roleplaying! [i'm also going to assume that your avatar is your skin, since it matches your appearance]

Moved to Denied Forum

Your application has been... A fairly good attempt, though I found a few issues: Even though you agreed to follow the Human lore and include it in your biography, you did not do so. Here is a link to the wiki to help you! http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/ Another issue in your biograohy, a three year old cannot fend for himself. Also, you seem to have travelled to Asulon, which is not allowed. You are only allowed to be born in Aegis or Asulon. I found some slight powergaming in your second Open Response Question. You seem to ignore the hit that the bandit gave you. Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post or face instand denial. If you have any questions, pop me a PM!

-Snippity snippy snip-

Your application has been... Put on Pending. Looks like you forgot to include a skin! Please fix this issue within 24 hours from this post or face denial Excellent. Wait patiently for a GM to implement you and happy roleplaying!

Moved to Denied Forum

Your application has been... Don't worry, it's not that much, so it'll be an easy thing to fix! First of all, I found all of your Open Response Questions to be quite short. I wish for you to expand on them. Secondly, you may control what the other characters in the Open Response Questions do, so in your second Open Response Question, you are allowed to control the bandits, so maybe you can use that together with the first issue! Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post or face instant denial. If you have any questions, pop me a PM!

It'll bring lots of good roleplay, so yes, I definently support this.

8/10. Hello Kha' buddy <3