Your application has been...
Denied.
Reason(s):
Your power-emoting definiton is incorrect. Check the forums and/or Wikipedia or something like that and find the definition. But remember, don't plagiarize, write it in your own words.
The beginning of your biography is very vague. You say that your mother died at child birth, yet your mother has burried your father? And then your father is back later in your biography. I think that this is a mere typo, but I had to think for a bit as it was quite confusing.
Another thing with your biography, you say that you bashed your father's head in. This isn't allowed and requires a Villain Application.
Add some more dialogue to your second Open Response Question.
In your third Open Response Question you steal the old man's Minas, which also requires a Villain Application.
Please re-apply in 24 hours.
If you have any questions, please, don't hesitate to PM me.