Sentlit

Minecraft Name: ((Sentlit)) *Cyrus attaches a clean piece of parchment near the poster, so that it may be found by whoever had put them up. Upon the parchment, are thin, gaudy, golden letters that fill the application. It is fastened to the board by a simple iron nail that protrudes from the board quite a bit.* Applicant Name: Cyrus Race and Age: I am a Mali who has completed about 90 years of life. What position are you applying for? (Librarian, Theurgist, Inventor, Analyst, Rhetor): I seek to become a Theurgist within this ministry. List any experience you have had with matters regarding that Department: I am adept in the Arcane art of Illusion, and have experienced many other forms of Arcane magic. I have a good grip upon the theories of the Arcane, as well as more practical information. Describe the reason for your interest in that position (>5 sentences): I have already had great interest in Arcane studies, and what better way is there to learn than to enter a mutual relationship in a fellowship of knowledge? I must say, that my skill in the Arcane would benefit lesser-knowing members, and that more knowledgeable members would aid me in such pursuits. This mutual relationship would put together a variety of information and ideas together, and it may be possible to reach an amazing breakthrough in the study of magic. I want to be a part of an institution as such that is formed at this moment. By applying, should you be accepted you are expected to utterly adhere to the Common Clauses. Do you understand this?: I do understand these clauses, and will fulfill them unto the best of my ability, lest I be expelled from this community.

Dang... This is terrifying :P

I enjoy this idea, but the only thing that urks me, the only thing, is the unlimited lifespan. People might be motivated to get the parasite for unlimited life rather than to create good RP. Maybe change it to 'adds 50 years at most' or something, rather than limitless life. Other than that, I like the idea.

In the past, Kalenz has made other great lores, and today he makes another. This would generate great RP as the ET or the GM who plays it have been known for being fair with the gift of power. I foresee no bad coming from this, and it adds a minor antagonist to most people. I say, accept it +1

I personally think this is great. My only complaint: that you stopped there :P I'd like you to add more entries, but I guess I'll have to be content with this. Also.. this helps set alchemists apart individually as a specific part of the RP, which is always a good thing. Overall good addition to the server. :D good job

MC Name: Sentlit Character Name: Lorenzo Nicodemo (Gatto) Age: ((Not sure. Young adult by now)) Race: Human Skype: ((You've already got it)) Weapon of Choice: Throwing knives and a sling Short Biography (2-5 sentences) or Ambitions: Lorenzo has always been close to his father and his other relatives. Ever since birth, he has had a lifelong friend that lives in a distant land. He swore to marry her, but his father insisted that they would move to Asulon. Promising return, Lorenzo obeyed his father and started a business there. Soon, the land was reclaimed and they lost everything that they had, and a seed of bitterness was planted within him. To get back on their feet, his father convinced lighthearted Lorenzo to come with him and embark on small thieving operations. He always treasured life, and was not one to harm, but he wanted to make his father proud and always went along. Since this time, he has obeyed his father constantly, no matter what it was, the seed of bitterness growing malignantly. Lorenzo's frustrations only grew as he began to realize that he would never see his sweetheart again. He only keeps this bitterness inside of him, bottled up to the world, so that not even his father knows. His disposition may seem happy, but he is not quite the naiive young boy that people used to know. He is more purposeful and thoughtful, yet still putting up a front of silliness. VA besides 1a, 3, 4a/b (recommended but not required): ((I do not have one yet. I'm working on it.)) Edit: ((Oh, sorry. I thought you said 2-3 paragraphs, not sentences :P))

6.7/10

*with great sobs and tears staining his shirt, Sen looks up to the figures that stand before him. His face reddened and wet, he blubbers: "What do you mean this isn't an RP specific thread?" *Sen gets up and trudges away, weeping. You can barely make out a salty trail of tears marking where he has been. ((And good luck getting the lore accepted my the MAT))