SoulReapingWolf

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Changed Status to Pending

Changed Status to Under Review Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on, For the following reasons, While your metagaming and Powergaming definitions are alright I suggest you use examples to show you understand the concept. Metagaming & Powergaming Your biography mentions lore that does not belong to the server, make sure you have at least 10 complete sentences and three lore mentions that do belong to the server, I’ll include a list of links that might be useful for that. Human Wiki Human Sub-Forum Human Empire Church of Cannon Red Faith Helena Settlement Guide Curon Settlement Guide Haense Settlement Guide Ves Settlement Guide Wiki Creatures Flora Calendar Arcas Settlement Guides Physical Description: This section of your application is for you to describe how your character looks like using this space to let people know how you picture them in your head. Your personality traits should be complete sentences and should follow the following format Positive Traits (Strengths, achievements, skills, feats) Neutral Traits (Likes, Dislikes, Quirks, Hobbies, Favorite Food, Interesting information) Negative Traits (Fears, Weaknesses) Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

Changed Status to Pending

Changed Status to Under Review Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on, For the following reasons, Your powergaming definition is not quite right, I suggest you make sure the definition we use in the server in the link I provide for you below and give an example to show you understand the concept. Powergaming Your biography mentions lore that does not belong to the server, make sure you have at least 10 complete sentences and three lore mentions that do belong to the server, I’ll include a list of links that might be useful for that. Human Wiki Human Sub-Forum Human Empire Church of Cannon Red Faith Helena Settlement Guide Curon Settlement Guide Haense Settlement Guide Ves Settlement Guide Wiki Creatures Flora Calendar Arcas Settlement Guides Please send a proper screenshot of your skin Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

Changed Status to Pending

Changed Status to Under Review Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on, For the following reasons, While your metagaming and Powergaming definitions are alright I suggest you use examples to show you understand the concept. Metagaming & Powergaming Your biography is not bad but you are missing at least two lore mentions in it. Calendar Arcas Settlement Guides Wiki Creatures Flora Dwarf Wiki Dwarf Sub-Forum Under-Realm of Urguan (Dwarf Kingdom) Urguan Nation GuideDwarven Clergy Brathmordakin Dwarven Clans Dwarven Guilds Dwarf Language Your personality traits should be complete sentences and should follow the following format Positive Traits (Strengths, achievements, skills, feats) Neutral Traits (Likes, Dislikes, Quirks, Hobbies, Favorite Food, Interesting information) Negative Traits (Fears, Weaknesses) Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

Changed Status to Denied

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Nice players can now make demands... (?)

100% Agreed we’ll work on removing this type of stuff and are working towards making the race more enjoyable and less restrictive.

Last time I tried working with some Hou-Zi on metztli rewrite they told me they didnt want anything to do with it.

Thanks for the feedback tbh I think I agree with most of the points you raised. We'll need to make sure some of them are clearer and consider maybe removing the ones might be pointless. (The Kha not being able to walk properly however has been in the lore for some time now so I don't know if it can be changed.)

Its a good thing this is a draft and the idea of posting the lore os for you and other people to give constructive criticism. We've heard some of tbe positions on some of the redlines and we've been making edits along the way. We asked the kha players their opinion on their rewrite and to lend a hand in it and some helped others didnt. Thanks for the feedback.

As it happened before Ibless cursed the descendants we are hesitant to touch the curses. But we'll be asking and working woth the Lore sect for this piece to make as much sense and to fit the server the best eay posible.

This could be considered or they could take the prosthethic path? But I'm sure Ender will reply shortly. Their age was similar but there never was a reasoning to it. After reading the lore it seemed highly unlikely for a "goddess" to create a perfect race and have them have the same lifespan of a race that has been cursed with short life and its mentioned in the original lore that metztli started doing this experiments when aeguls and daemons still roamed the lands which leads us to think that the creation of the Kharajyr happened before the ibless war thus before the mortality curse. This one is the only one I don't agree with you on, the same way as the tusks of an orc affect his speach the fangs and canines of a kha and their maw affect the speech of a Kha, kha that where raised in other cultures however tend to adopt a different accent. For example a kha that was raised among dwarves might have a combination of their accents with a bit more dwarf prominent one. The other redlines we are wprking on to make the race enjoyable and not a pain. Thanks for your feedback we'll get working on fixing some of this. This one is a bit hard to enforce to be honest, and there are not instructions on overheating and its not something I've seen anyone in the server rp yet, I think we'll make it so kaybe they can wear it but are still clumsy and feel heavy with it given the whole race is more of a agile and speed reliant race.

In the Original Lore it’s unclear with which descendands Metztli did the experiments that lead to the creation of the Kharajyr, with this rewrite we aim to fix this problem and make it clear, as she was looking to create a “perfect” race we’ve chosen the elves which usually are seen as “superior” in fantasy worlds.

As a player with a Kha that was raised by the Dwarves, I felt this a bit constricting as well but this is why I added the following paragraph. The main culture and behavior of the Kha as a race is mainly the one posted here and is not as much as a barrier but more of a “guide” towards what it’s mostly like, however, different players can develop their characters in a way that strays away from this and fits more with their upbringing and their current character development. We are always open however to suggestions and would like to hear more from you. BTW I’ll be working soon on posting some of the different cultures Kha have acquired throughout the years living with different nations. If you are interested in this feel free to contact me.

Wohooo finally up! Thanks Ender for your help in this project!

I’ll admit I was hesitant at first, but I think that despite the grim theme I enjoy this. the art certainly follows that. To be honest I’d aim for it to go first through an event creature only stage so players don’t ruin it as it comes out. Then after an ET has shown a bit how they work players can follow that example. (I don’t mean you or Jentos will butcher it just other players might.)

Changed Status to Denied

I am sorry to be the one to tell you this but your application was unfortunately But don’t give up just yet, you can make another immediately! Your time limit has expired. Whenever you make a new application remember to take into account my previous comments. Make sure you add the corrections I said on my previous comment before you post another application. If you have any doubts, please don’t hesitate to contact me through a message in the forums or via the New Player Discord.