[Denied]Application (3Rd Time)

[justDEWit 133]

Out-Of-Character Information

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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:funny981

How old are you?: 11

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yeah I am.

Have you applied to this server before?: Yes, two-times in fact.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes and yes I do agree.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Don't hack, it just makes other players game experience horrible.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): All of the rules make sense to me.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was looking for LOTR servers. 

Definitions

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What is roleplaying?:Roleplaying is when you make a character and use his/her attributes in society.

What is metagaming?:Using knowledge that your character hasn't learned yet. Like knowing how to use magic if you aren't a shaman.

What is power gaming?:Not letting the other person get a change to do anything. let's say you just straight up kill them, that is power-gaming. If you ATTEMPT to kill them, that isn't power-gaming.

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Glockrun Tissracke

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: High Elf

Character’s age: 110

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to you character so that they don’t contradict history.):

      Glockrun was born in 1337 into the Great War between all the four races. His father and mother raised him in secret, trying to stay away from the Great War. They dug deep underground and hid in a cave. It was well decorated and the had a little farm. Then, the undead attacked and came from the Nether destroying everything in sight with flames. The undead had ended the great War and had a shield made killing all that weren't undead that touched the shield. Luckily Glockruns' father was trained in magic so he used his magic to bypass the shield. The undead spotted them as they walking to the top of the hill to go to the new land. The father stood there and held off the dark forces using his magic. They made it to the top and went through the portal to the new land. The next thing Glockrun knew, he saw hundreds maybe millions off Elves. They all sailed together to the new land they call Asulon.

        The Elves settled in a forest and named it Malinor, they quickly started to make houses for the people. They made lots of different settlements but one settlement became the capital, Luminaire. The mother brought him to the commander and said to Glockrun, "Oh my handsome little baby Glockrun Tissracke, I love you. Can you stay here and wait for mommy?" Glockrun said " Yes mommy, I can wait for you!" That night she left and never came back for him. He asked all around for her and no one said they saw her. He became more angry, taking out his rage in training. To this day, he is looking for his mother and will not give up until he finds her.

Personality Traits:

Confident: He isn’t very intimidated; if he sees a large enemy he just wants to fight it even more. He takes challenges head-on.

Persistence: If he fails he doesn’t give up. He will never give up especially for one of his own kind.

Curious: He has never even left the forest, so he hasn’t seen the world, he wants to explore. Sometimes his curiosity gets him into a lot of trouble.

Ambitions: To find his mother and take back his home in the Aegis. She said she would come back, but she never did. He won’t give up until he finds her.

Strengths/Talents: Very fast, Can whistle to distract people, and Has amazing bow skills.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Not very strong, Wear light armor, and Isn't very good in magic since he has never trained.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height, weight): He is only 6' 2" and weighs 113 pounds and has green eyes. He is a mage that wears a archers uniform as given to him by his father. His green archer armor has a quiver carrying all of his arrows. He has black hair and amber eyes. He also holds a secret dagger hidden in his quiver and a sword on his back.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):elf_minecraft_skin-3937041.jpg

[MamaBearJade 2090]

 

 

You failed to wait the 24 hours, due to this you have been denied. Wait 24 hours from this post before applying again. Failure to do so will result in a ban for 1 month from applying as it will also be your 5th application.

 

You failed to link your three prior applications in your application

Issues with your bio

- Why would high elves live underground?

- Underground farms are a banned

- Undead did not have a shield that you described

- There is no known magic that can dispell a shield like that

- What happened to the father?

- Why would his mother leave him if he was still young?

- What happened after Asulon?

- Why wasn't he raised with other High Elves?

- Why did he not go through purity trials if he was raised away from high elves?

- What group did he train with?

Personality "Curious" contradicts bio

Ambitions need work

- Can not go back to aegis

- Cliche "searching for parents"

Strengths has slight powergaming "Can whistle to distract people"

Weaknesses are not weaknesses

Weaknesses need to balance out strengths

Can not know magic prior to joining lord of the craft, must be learned in game with a teacher

Appearance issues

- 6'2 and 113 lbs is not a realistic or acceptable. Please look up proper weights for that height

- Read high elven lore for appearance

- Skin does not match High Elven lore

[MamaBearJade 2090]

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