[Denied] [Pending] Bryan's Application

[Bryan2507 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: bestplayer14452

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes 

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): NO

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Cyber bullying is not right.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? By a friend

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: In the act of performing in a particular role.

What is metagaming?:Using the knowledge behind the screen that your character does not know.                                       What is powergaming?: a style of interacting with games with a aim maximising progress towards a certain goal.

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Cyran Blackheart

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race:  Wood Elf

Character’s age: 124

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): My parents were supporters of Silver Enclave of Haelun they praised the group like it was god itself. Soon after the government was overthrown my parents decided to run towards the forest on  there way there they got spotted by men who overthrew the government so they decided to leave me on a tree and leave my brother in the city with my grandparents after they ran out to distract them. Later I fell off the tree and hit my head hard on the floor. My parents got away safely and tried to come back to get me, When they came I was gone.  A beautiful maid found me just laying there after I fell. She picks me up and lets me stay at her home. I ask her, "are you my mom?" She responds with a "No, but I found you in the forest by yourself do you know whats your name?" I say "I don't know who or what I am." She looked at my pointy ears and a ripped green robe, "Looks like your a wood elf." I looked at myself. "I guess I am?" I said it like it was a question. "Are you sure you don't remember anything?" She asked. "The only thing I know was that I was left in the forest where you found me" I said. "Well then I shall name you after my dad, your name will be Cyran Ualair" She said. "Well I like it!" "Where am I?" I asked. She said," Oh were in Athera, Its a beautiful place once you know it" *She smiles*.

 

 After the Orc-Dwarf war came to a end, a giant worm destroyed most of Athera. Not able to find the women who took care of me and I assumed she was gone, and I was right. After roaming in Vailor he found a man who recognized him. The man told him he was his brother. After the man named Elyon Blackheart told him stories of their childhood. After traveling together around the world they got recruited by the Order of Sirame. We guarded and protected it with there mighty swords until we were separated by a battle in the forest of evil monsters and for this day I am still trying to find my brother who I lost again. 

Personality Traits: Curious, Strong will, and Easily impressed 

Ambitions: To find my brother and grow stronger in my journey.

Strengths/Talents: Archery and farming

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Being alone and Sword skills

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 5'12 159 pounds

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

http://imgur.com/6kSg2Y4

[Jonificus 2751]

 

http://i.imgur.com/yrBryoK.png

 

You have 24 hours to rectify the point(s) below, message me when this is done or if you have any questions or concerns.

 

• Powergaming definition is incorrect.
• Elaborate on the abandonment and discovery of Cyran, elves are very protective and caring for their children so why was Cyran left alone in the forest? He's old enough to speak so he couldn't have been left there since birth

 

Good luck, and I'll see ya later!

I suggest checking out our wiki or the new player guides if you haven't already, they're a great tool for applicants.

 

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

 

• Plagiarizing is not allowed on LotC, refrain from doing this again or you will be temporarily banned from applying. Consider this your first and final warning.
• P.S: My apologies for taking so long to reply.

Please check out our wiki and the new player guides if you haven't already, they're a great tool for applicants.

[Jonificus 2751]

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