[Denied]My Application

[MaybeDamo 32]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - Halomanter12

How old are you?: - 14

What time-zone do you live in?: - Eastern

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - yes, over the phone with my friends

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - no

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - 

How did you hear about us?: -mthdominater introduced me to it

What do you think the server will be like? - A great fun roleplaying experiance

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - yes

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - no chat spamming

Definitions

This
is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know
about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that
you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - Making a char and adding real life qualities and ambitions

What’s metagaming?: - using out of character knownladge in game

What’s powergaming?: - The use of unfair advantages in roleplay such as an over powered character

In-Character Information

Now
you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable!
Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with
a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Orion

What race are they (and sub-race)?: -Dark elf

What sex are they?: - Male

How old are they?: - 52

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - From the great land of Aegus, Orion grew up a timid and shy dark elf. Orion would never play with any of the other dark elves. Until the White Rose took over and he was at the young age of 32 and realized something inside him changed, he had awaken with his mother to see she was dead. He and his father mourned the greif at the death camp. Orion knew he had to find the men who had killed his mother. Orion had very strong hatred toward the human race until he met a woman named Melo who soon became the love of his life. Orion and Melody were soon to be married before Orion's father died. Orion couldnt bare the pain of losing anymore of his loved ones and so he tried to die fighting agaist the White Rose and in the battle Melody died. Orion soon finally decided to give up , he Had lost all hope for his life and his hatred soon fueled him to contiue fighting.

What are they like (personality)?: - Strong and Brave but will betray you if you are not to be trusted

What are their ambitions?: -To annailate the humans

Do they have any special skills?: - Archery, theiving, and minor potion skills. Also a little bit of sword fighting

What are their weaknesses?: - Cats and cocoa beans

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - Tall, white hair , purple eyes, muscular and very angry looking with a scar above the eyes

Anything else you want to say about them?: -Orion is the great leader of many men 

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - 
 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Your application has been...

 

-While yet a great first attempt, there are some major flaws that need to be fixed.

-The white roses appeared in the time of Asulon (Which was roughly 50 years ago (ICly) furthermore, if your character was from Aegis he would have to go through Asulon, Elysium, and Kalos to get through to Anthos, making him atleast 100 years old. I would suggest reading up on the lore of Anthos on the wiki.

 

 

-your definitions are VERY vague, I would advise you to to expand on them, and to possibly include an example.

 

-Your weakness and Strengths are massively out of proportion. I can understand someone not liking cats and chocolate...but its not really a weakness, I would suggest you to possibly point out a physical flaw, or a mental trait that effects his life in a negative manner.

 

-Feel free to PM me if you have any questions.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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