[Denied]Novex's First Application

[Novex Nightgale 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: -  dumbclowny
How old are you?: -  13
What time-zone do you live in?: -  EST (5:oo GMT)


Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: -  Not really.
Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: -  I am currently helping build a role playing server http://landofcaeldor.enjin.com/
Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): -  No


How did you hear about us?: - My wonderful friend MG_Savior  other wise known IC as Ace Souldblade
What do you think the server will be like? -  A wonderful RP experience that I'll enjoy with friends and won't be ruined by rulebreakers.
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes
What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: -  Racism is allowed in character


Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: -  Acting with text/words.

What’s metagaming?: -  Use of information gained out of character, while in character

What’s powergaming?: -  Performing an action with an unfair advantage, or not giving the other person a chance to react

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: -  Novex Nightgale

What race are they (and sub-race)?: -  Wood Elf

What sex are they?: -  Male

How old are they?: -  23

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): -  The story of Novex Nightgale begins deep within the holy princedom of Malinor, in it's first capital city, Laurelin. Hidden in this city made up of a dense forest of very tall trees, was where he experienced his childhood. Novex was always going around looking for trouble, his ignorant parents never paying attention. Novex wasn't the average wood elf either, often disrespectful unlike other kind wood elves. Other wood elves looked down upon him, since he liked to be in company of dark elves. He was never the most careful, often reckless, and his big brother was always there keeping watch over him and stepping in when necessary. Although he attempted to keep himself controlled, things never turned out the way he liked. Always ending up in trouble, fights, and wars with other kids of Laurelin. He was often misjudged, being called a short little redhead, he was never one to hold on to his temper, always letting it go.  He was a very skilled wood elf, letting his small, nimble body benefit him granting him quick movements, like his ancestors, his bow was always what he relied on always carrying it on his back. Novex was always on the go discovering new places and chasing after his all his curiosities. He had a great adventurous childhood, up until the day where it all went spiraling down.  

The realm of Aegis was often getting attacked by undead, and after years that attacks became increasingly greater. Laurelin was one of the best most protected cities of Malinor and was often considered a safe haven for elves. However even the strongest can come crumbling down, but this wasn't entirely the case Laurelin held on strong and fought till the end. Novex's parents however weren't the most fortunate, and got thrown into the chaos of the war against the undead. While Novex was out in his usual adventures his parents were fighting for their lives, a mob of undead had come to their door step and had come down hard on them. His parents were skilled and held on for a while, but eventually it became too much and they had to give up. 

When Novex returned home he wasn't able to simply stroll into the house, finding his door torn off. When he entered he was surprised to see the whole place wrecked, and then something popped into his mind. On the top of his lungs he shouted "MOTHER? FATHER." However he heard no response, and he quickly searched the house. What he found was his father, severely injured, unconscious, hopeless, but his mother was no where to be found. He quickly tried to get medical attention to his father, but that didn't help. His father, dead, his mother, lost what was he going to do now? 

After settling down his caring brother came to mind, he had moved out a while ago and often stopped by to see how it was going. Novex still remembered where he lived from the visits he had taken there. He rushed straight there, running straight through the door  and into his arms when he got there. His brother assured him everything was going to be alright, and he would grow up to be an intelligent man like his father. From there on he lived the rest of his childhood with his brother, calmer than before but still tough and stayed out of trouble. When time came he left his brother to explore the world, get a job, and settle down in his own place. He hoped everything was for his own good, but maybe he hadn't lost everything...

What are they like (personality)?: -  Intelligent, cold-hearted, violent, bit ignorant, thoughtful and kind when necessary.

What are their ambitions?: -  To change his attitude and live life happilly, to one day find out where his mother went.

Do they have any special skills?: -  Very quick, and agile with motions and master bowman.

What are their weaknesses?: -  Big mobs of undead

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: -  Red hair, light green eyes, light brownish skin, and short, skinny, yet agile figure.

Anything else you want to say about them?: -  Very good fighter, talks back, not to be underestimated.



Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -  

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Your application has been...

-Your roleplaying definition is wrong.

-Both your meta-gaming, and power-gaming definitions are too short. Try and expand upon them, maybe use an example?

-Your biography only includes things about AEGIS. Which was well over 50 years ago in character. Please try to include some lore about Anthos, or possibly Asulon instead.

-Your weakness is kind of a given... Everyone is weak to hordes of undead.

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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